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Senryu: Don't Dood It
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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I'd kill my dang self if I tried this move. OW! Makes me hurt just seeing it. (This particular move is called the "Bielman.")


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flexibility
carried out to the extreme
watching it, i cringe

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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Reviewed on February 26, 2006
Sweet!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed on February 24, 2006
Karla,

*OW* That move makes me hurt too! If I did that, I'd end up in a WHEELCHAIR! LOL Amazint what some of those skaters can do!

Well done haiku; brava! You are the Kween of the Ku's! Keep them coming!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2006
Yeah, but I'm think of all the possibilities that . . . never mind, you are right. Uh, huh.

Reviewed on February 23, 2006
Excellent as always Karla
God Bless
MIchelle!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on February 23, 2006
I reckon you would need to be supple and double jointed Karla, to pull that tricky maneuver off...:)
Nice and neat senryu
Peter

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 23, 2006
Awwwwww...that was my sport...loved it!!

Not THAT painful when you are well trained!!

But no price to gain without that little pain!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on February 23, 2006
Ha ha..excellent Karla, it sure looks painful!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on February 23, 2006
L-OUCH-L !!!:) Unreal to me that a n y o n e can pull off a maneuver like that. If God meant for us to turn ourselves into
pretzels, she woulda set us up with fully-equipped stands on
corners that draw tourists with more money'n sense. . .right? ~~~ Ya done goooood, my friend. Ya done gooooood. Love and cirque tickets from yo
loyal an' admirin' Keh'lan frin {inflexible tho I be ;)}

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2006
I cringe too as I fall forward with my lack of balance :-) Great write.


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