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Operator, Operator!
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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"What? I can't hear you! Speak up--whatcha say? HUH????"

It's State Fair time again, kids! :)


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"Operator, Operator!"
~~~
The head, dizzy; tummy in
r e v o l t
as I am blended into
scenery:
all becomes a blur of life
passing
in front of rolling eyeballs;
mouth opens
in pitiful mewlings, to
ask the
operator in control
of my fate
to take things S  L  O  W and easy.

You know
how noisy midways can be...
bet he heard,
"KICK IT UP ANOTHER NOTCH!!!"
~~~
(c) 2006, Karla Dorman (9/28)


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Reviewed on October 2, 2006
Karla I loved this one, great work here, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 1, 2006
sounds like lots of fun ... a place for people to enjoy ...

Reviewed on October 1, 2006
Having spent my younger years traveling state to state playing county and state fairs. I can truly relate to this one. As of today I never go on the rides.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
A manic fair in Slooooow Texas?
Have fun, fun, fun..

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
A fair is very special for towns...
xoxoxox

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Yea I watched the folks on a fair in town today and wondered how people can be so gullible as to pay to be tortured to the point of being sick, oh well each to their own I guess.

Fee

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
such an irony...........
selective hearing!!!funny write
pax A

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Hey have a great run Karla! I'm sure you can kick it up;-)
Having fun on the midway makes for a delighful poem!

Eileen

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
NOW I LIKE THEM JUST FOR THE SHOWS
i STAY AWAY FROM ALL RIDES,
I LEAVE THAT TO MY GRANDKIDS
NOW IS THIER TURN TO START ENJOYING LIFE
A LOVELY PIECE ... KARLA

LOVE & PEACE
wILLIAM

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
I stay off most of the rides now since they seem to make me more dizzy than they used to, or perhaps I no longer like dizzy as much as I once did. Either way, I go to the fair for the funnel cakes, turkey legs, hot dog on a stick, corn on the cob, snow cones and cotton candy, these days. I just can't bring myself to go on those rides that smell of barf anymore, especially if it is my own. ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Cute poem!!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
LOL.. which is why I do not do rides! I have found that 'green' is not my best color... Loved the poem!

Myrna

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Fairs are great, but Scares are better...e

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Fair time here too and after this one leaves the State Fair comes into town.I'll be taking mt daughter Maruah. She's the thrill seeker. Me? I'm in it for the feel of straw/hay underfoot; the fair food I wouldn't touch any other time and the rich diverse aromas of cotton candy...yummy!... the farm smell of animals I love in their place. I wouldn't miss the squeel of kids and the crank of all the rides. This is one activity that lends it's own difference once a year.
Your poem is full of fairtime for fall.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
I use to love it...but my old head does not like all that spinning anymore!!

You brought back some good memories!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Ha, Karla, won't catch me on one of those anytime soon. I enjoy watching others have fun at fairgrounds, but nah-ah, my old tummy just can't handly the thrills of those fast rides anymore. You have don't a nice job depicting this dizzying ride. Well done!

God Bless
Love, Lena

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
I am not much for fairs, but can understand the fun one can have in such events. Victor

Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Does the opening of the Texas State Fair have anything to do with this, Karla, hmmmm??? *grins*

In any event, a great write; very well done! BRAVA! Ah, the memories this brings back; we were young and stupid then, glad we are past that wild stage (although we don't mind a wild ride now and then today, just to keep the ol' blood and heart a pumpin'! LOL)!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
What fun! You've captured the thrill of the ride to a "T", Karla!
Delightful read.
Hugs,
CJ

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Karla

Can feel that squeazy feeling in the stomach already..
Way to go Karla !

Blessings
Peter

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 30, 2006
Just looking at that image makes me sick Karla. Oh my ... have I had some bad experiences on those wild carnival rides. A good-un ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg


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