Heavy Metal (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2007

Melodies are more soothing.... I love all music but not the really loud clashing ROCK. This was well expressed Karla.

Blessings,
Peace, Love
Joselyn

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 18, 2007

Fantastic metaphor, how well I relate to this one Karla!;-)Great poem!

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2007

Love it, Karla! Here's hoping your orchestra goes to a mellow intermission riff! Blessings!

Ted

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

I know that feeling too, thank you for sharing this write with us
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Great write Karla, I know the feeling! We might as well smile...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

this is incredible imagery...but I with you did not have to live with it.

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Very well done and an apt description of those melodies ... they sound like mine, Karla! Cute as a button poem.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Great comparson, and I defiately also feel the same melodies.

Fee

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Just don't call and sing in my ear...LOL...e

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Gotta love your attitude, Karla. Love, peace, and freedom from pain,
your friend from BC, Canada,

Regis

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Sing Nightingale sing...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Ouch!!!!! That hurts!!!!!! Karla, I'm so glad you can find humour in it!!!!! You possess the most wonderful spirit!!!!!

Love to you,

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Really enjoyed this one Karla...funny some of the melodies our aging
bodies sing
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Now this is what I call an innovative way of looking at our aches and pains. Its music to our ears.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

You sound just like jukebox. Whar is your favorite music?
This makes light of the pain and this is one key to comquering your ills as well.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Auch....sound like you are in trouble...but this still made me laugh..like bumping your toe...the harder you scream the more painful it gets!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

LOL Karla, this is a hoot! Sorry to laugh at your pain (I am having a concert of my own today, too! LOL), but it is good to laugh at it; it makes it much easier to bear! Very well done; love your sense of humor! BRAVA~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

Ouch! And I hear, ya. My melodies get screechier every day, too. (Good thing my dogs don't mind!)