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Rainy Day Blues
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Trying to laugh but it's getting harder, being down in the damp ...


... Heavy precipitation
smashes the leaves to the ground
covered in wet.  Soooooo weary
of forecasts that have the sound

of rain in them.  Thunder peals
back the roof, funnel clouds dance;
no damage here.  Yet.  July
fireworks?  Not likely; a chance

they will be canceled, unless
it's Nature's show.  Hard to cope --
don't know how much more we can --
Thought sun by the weekend.  Hope

fading with each cloud that forms;
soaked to the skin, hair a mess,
I'm w a t e r l o g g e d!  If it ends
will be anybody's guess ...

'cause weathermen don't know s q u a t.


(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (4/3)

   

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 Reviews of "Rainy Day Blues"
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
squat from squit! i say. ha ha soon you'll be sunburned

Reviewed on July 5, 2007
NO kIdding-weather man will share tid bits! for their own reasons!
I'ts cloudy here and it's Thursday, rain keeps showing than going!
Hang In! Sunshine is around the corner and then it will be too hot!
Love this imagery poem Karla!
STay SAFE!
STay Positive!
Warmly, WArrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
I'm feeling spoild here in the Northeast, until the hurricanes arrive. We've had a few tornadoes (very unlikely here).

take care,
Kathy

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
We were supposed to have sunshine today, well I see clouds outside...I wonder about the weathermen??? Seems that their not quite what their cracked up to be...can just about predict the weather with the old time methods that my grandparents used and be more accurate. Hope the sun shines soon, hope you had a wonderful fourth, and fifth, and hope the sixth and the days that follow are even better! God bless!
Blessings from Kentucky,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 4, 2007
Looks like TEXAS got pounded. I pray there was a lull in the tempest storm for a while today. I wish you a happy Independance Day,nomatter what the weather was!.....M

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 4, 2007
You got that right, Karla, the weatherman often forgets to look outside before giving his forcast. We could use a bit of that rain here, it has been hot and dry, though this evening we are finally having a little bit of rain, probably not enough to do much, but it got me inside and out of working any longer in the yard, so I guess it's not all bad. Hang in there, Karla, the weather is bound to change.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 4, 2007
hope you get some sun soon ... keep the fireworks of your heart sparkling ...

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2007
This too shall pass, hang in there. Lady J

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Well, looking around for life jackets for my kitties, but have not found any small enough yet.......

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
I hope your July 4 is more joyous and drier than today and you enjoy your fireworks. They've already started here in Columbus. Thanks Karla

Abdullahi

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
As Long As You Still Got Blues
As Long As (God)Still Didn't Send You (Your)Dues
As Long As You Still Do Choose
As Long As You'll Still Be Here Readen (My) News...

Cause (God) Don't Know (Give ) Squat...

TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Another excellent poem ,but I look forward to the dryer days when you can have some joy!

ET

Reviewed on July 3, 2007
This is an excellent write here, thank you for sharing, God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Lets tell the weathermen, we only want rain at night....

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
I love rain but too much of it can be a pain. We do not get much rain here so send us some. It is hot and dry here fires are happening.
Hope the sun shines for you soon.
Hugs Angela

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
I wish You Dryness soon sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Karla, with all this rain, lets hope it turns the sidewalks green.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
I read that there are places where temperatures are soaring. As for fireworks, here in Malta it was so hot a firework factory blew up leaving five killed. Let it rain and enjoy your feast.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Getting too much of a good thing can dampen anybodys spirits. Rain is a blessing but when it's out of control, it can be hell.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Only nature knows what it will do next. Weathermen just guess :-)

Know the feeling about the rain. We have had a lot of it here too and high winds we don't normally get. However it looks like the sun has finally broken through here, I hope with your next write I find that this is your truth as well :-)

Reviewed on July 3, 2007
It's a wonder you haven't floated away Karla. Enjoyed the poem.

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Gosh! So long you have had rain and storms -in London too, the wettest June EVER - liked 'Thunder peals
back the roof, funnel clouds dance;' It's just thundering here - and sunny - best go looking for rainbows - hope you can have your fireworks and a happy July 4th to you Karla, Nicky x

Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Hi Karla, I really do feel ya. When it rains for too long I get depressed..Sunny days are for fun.PLB&G to you and Karen for caring and sharing. Mikii

Reviewed on July 3, 2007
I hope we get to see some fireworks, and I don't mean lightning!! This rainy pattern has been something else, hasn't it?? I hope the sun will come out soon, so at least we can have a chance to dry out! It's a bit wet here...Not good, especially since I can't even swim! YIKES! Your frustrations are very well endowed, Karla; excellent rant!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Happy Fourth of July anyway tomorrow; glad I am spending it with you! :)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Tomorrow we will be thinking about you when the fireworks gets going and if/when/or our "fricking blessed" rain stop.
Sit on the roof and let it fall.
Happy Fourth of July...with a big smile!!!!!!!!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
good write-must be so very tough when an end does not seem to be in sight

Reviewed on July 3, 2007
Great weather poem, Hope there will be exciting fireworks in this July


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