Earth Song (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)

Reviewed on July 12, 2007

Karla --

go take a bath. Love this one.

hugs,
Kathy

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2007

Dear Karla,

Remember when it was such a delight to cover ourselves, from head to toe, with mud. Sing the song of the celebration of life!

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 8, 2007

well, at least you can save the money on getting a mud pack ...

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on July 8, 2007

Lovely write, Karla. Glad to know you're ok and in good spirits...
Your old island friend,
Jenni

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on July 8, 2007

Your poem says it all Karla. I pray the rain will stop soon in flooded parts of the US.......M

Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2007

I saw the flood in TX on the news and hoped you weren't in that area ... Last year, it rained for 40 days straight in HI that caused floods too ... I was going crazy with all that rain ... great poem, Karla ... hugs

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed

Reviewed on July 7, 2007

Enjoy the mud and wet earth in the rainy season. It is another blessing from the Lord.
Thanks.

Abdullahi

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 7, 2007

I like your bit of humor here-good write

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 7, 2007

Hahahahaha.....thanks...I think I know that yukky feeling...specially if porky-pooh is covering you and not only mud....YUK...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on July 7, 2007

Been there and done that my friend...fell in the middle of the slick mud right infront of a crowd of people...Ooh what a moment, I laughed it off and no one was the wiser that I was totally embarassed! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 7, 2007

LOL!! Can you send us the video of that, Karla?? YouTube is waiting to make you a star!! I read that the storms are finally subsiding in Texas, I hope it is so. You people certainly get your share of weather, hard to believe you are my neighbor to the east. Weather is mild here for the most part and slow to change. I think we could have used some of that rain that decided to hang over your great state.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

I would pay dearly to see you drop on your, er, ah, oh what the hell, rump/butt/ass...;) Ed >>>{running away at a high rate of speed...LOL}

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

I love the rain but when it gets soggy and the water stands and then mosquitoes hatch then it sucks and they sting and then deseases are born from mosquitoes and now I've made myself crazy.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

I like to play in the muddy waters but at my choice. Need to think about doing the naked sun dance. lady J

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

This is an excellent write, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

You can make a poem out of anythingKarla!;-) I'm so glad you're not hurt! It has to be so frustrating with all that rain turning things to mud etc. My prayers are with you guys! Hang in there...this too shall pass!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Joyce Devenish

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

Good write Karla, Yes I know how you feel. I have slipped in the mud in a white skirt. Very embarrassing....Lots of love...Joyce

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

Hmmm fancy a mud wrestle if not a mud bath? fun fun fun

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

Karla,
Victor's comment about mud wrestlin got my mind to wandering a bit.
But It sounds like you aren't having that much fun...send us some rain ...please

Walt

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

After last weeks two days camping in the rain at a folk festival I can easily relate to this one and I have learned all you can do is laugh at it.
hugs
FEe

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

Thankfully...you rose again. Good pen!

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

Good write. However, I'm sorry you're in the muck!

George

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

Makes me think why some women just love to fight in mud :) Crazy world. But like you I hate mud.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 6, 2007

LOL Funny write; glad you are okay! Glad I am okay, coz I did the same blamin' thing! LOL Glad we will have a chance to dry out at least a little bit; Lord knows, we need a break from all this! LOL Excellent pen; enjoyed the humor very much! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Twinkletoes. :D