Snit From A Muse (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on July 20, 2007

Srong words to SOMEONE!!!!!...m

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on July 18, 2007

Snit back at it...
Aye wots Sir Andy up to down there?
Hmmmmm strange happenings LOL

Hugs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2007

Wow! This is indeed a clever write.
Enjoyed!

Pat

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on July 17, 2007

Well written conversation piece. It's as though you are actually talking and that makes this poem come to life. Enjoyed!

George

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on July 17, 2007

This pen has me wondering many things.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 17, 2007

Interesting, does the poet control the muse or the muse control the poet. Perhaps it is an equal partnership.

Fee

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2007

Very cute,Hugsssssssssssss

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 17, 2007

WOW!!!!your muse most be in qualudes with not downs.
But the poem sings, loud and clear.
Georg

Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2007

Yep, I agree! lol A clever write indeed, Karla! hugs

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

What type of whine does your muse like to snit about...e ;)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

Blimey.. she's givin YOU a hard time, too, eh?? Them that can, do... those that can't... snit and preach and boss!!!! Perhaps she needs to know you can do quite well without her... On the other hand... perhaps it's best not to overstep the mark! Might be a bit rash! Love the humour here, Karla, and I am sure we can all relate... Yes, OK... I'm finishing (an aside to my Review Muse...) :)) xoxoxox

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

Well written Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

Karla another amazing write, thank you for sharing, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

This is so clever dear Karla. WOW ... one of your very best. Maybe that muse is just constipated and needs a good colon cleanse, or maybe just some prune juice shooters. (-:
Blessings ...
Richard

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

Well, smack her a good one. ROFL

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

Oh, listen to the voice of the muse, Dear Karla and follow wherever it leads. Set your compass toward the brightest star!

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

The Muse is sometimes a cruel inspiration. Don't give up. Victor

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

If this is as Eileen suggest it is brassy and deserving, not to mention clever.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

hahaha Karla you are a hoot! a poem about your muse being in a snit, now that is clever and so much like you!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

Don't know wot u mean

Now where in the world did THIS one come from???? LOL..

I do not write at all: gave that
up a long time ago.
What I wanted you to write or
what I wanted you to

see never happened the way it
was supposed to: you had
to be stubborn, go your own way.
Could have made it better,

but nooo...you had to change things, make
it yours, not ours. Wanted
to make you see the same things, make
you believe that something

was there, if for one moment. You
stole my words and dare call
yourself "Poet" ---- and ask
why I no longer come around.

(c) 2007,Andy (7/16)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

fun write!

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

Ouch! I have that conversation all the time...

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

Damn ol' muse; tell her to stop being so b****y! LOL Put her in her place; show her who's boss! LOL Adorable write; enjoyed~ Keep on writing! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Even when you don't feel like it, WRITE, WRITE, WRITE!!!!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 16, 2007

Our Muses can be very Snitty - My Muse, Bullwinkle Moose - always gives me a very hard time (but he says it's for my own good.)