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On A Tear
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Tomorrow, THE BIG DAY. :)

Thank you for the prayers and good wishes. Means a lot!!


Poem Artwork

On a tear:  ripping through
the apartment, a storm
bent not on destruction,
but on cleaning from top

to bottom:  the floors, swept
and mopped!  the furniture,
dusted; dishes put up;
laundry washed, folded, put

away.  Batteries for
the camera charged!  Make
sure you have the items
they asked you to have.  Check

off items when finished:
done.  Done.  Done!  It looks/smells
good.  Can't sleep, might as well
do something constructive

(instead of thinking nerves) ...

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (10/2)


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 Reviews of "On A Tear"
Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
Excellent. Very creative electric flow. Very current, original and well crafted.

With respect (and I'm probably wrong) but new and refreshing rather than classic.

Buet there - I'm an old fashioned rock.

Blessings,
Keith

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Xanax helps me......LOL
Love,

Walt

Reviewed by J AG
Reviewed on October 3, 2007
sounds like the holidaze . . . your style is so classic, an easy projection from page to the imagination. the animation is wonderful, too, by the way.

jackie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 3, 2007
You gogirl!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on October 3, 2007
...excited for you... perhaps you are more charged than your batteries...inside your camera...your energy looks out...see everything...shares it with us.
best wishes...
John

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
I can only imagine the butterflies in the tummy! Great work Karla and Karen, I know you're up to it and will charm everyone!God bless and best wishes!

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
That's some might strong wind. Good for you.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
Exciting! Wish we could all be there. We will in our thoughts.

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
You and Karen will be GREAT!!! Theatrically speaking, break a leg both of you. You will have them chewing at the bit to get you back on tv to stay. I'm proud of you both, and please do take lot of pictures to share with all of us!!
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
You Go, Girl!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
Karla I am wishing you the best today and I know as long as you are you then that is what they'll be getting. Kick ass.

Newfie Hugs are with you, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
Cold feet, anxiety, under theater lights debut, sleeplessness, and when the hour comes you will be cool as a cucumber!!!!!!!
Good luck and when nervous, think on us!
Georg

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
I can feel your energy from your writing. You're busy thinking ahead, and soon you'll be living the moment, and afterwards you'll be looking back to consider if your handled it well. I'm sure you will by just being you--the one they are interested in and want to hear more about from you.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
Wishing you the very best sweet lady...HUgsss

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
Karla,

Good Luck my friend. Hope everything works out. Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 2, 2007
"That's it, you're finished and everything is done; Now is the time to have some fun. Nothing more to do cause you worked all night, now relax my lady, it will be alright!" wtg Karla and enjoy the day. It is well deserved. God bless.

Reviewed on October 2, 2007
Today is the day and you'll be just fine. PLB&G are sent your way always. Luvya <Mikii>

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
Relax, relax, relax!! Stand tall and be proud of your accomplishments. Remember, God is watching over you to keep you safe. You will do just fine.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
Sleep will come, close your eyes, say your prayers and let Him take care of the rest - you've done your part.

Best wishes and some extra prayers for you and Karen.

Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
what a state we do get in-i could see myself in this write-i can certinly let nerves get to me-good for the house though! best to you and your sis tomorow-can't wait to hear

Reviewed on October 1, 2007
Awesine wrute and congrats, I want lots of pictures
God BLess
Michelle~

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
My prayers are with you.
May you prosper and have good success.
Love, Hugs and Smiles,
Patty

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
You sound just like a human vortex. Take pictures...take LOTS of pictures. I'm excited for you too! Go get'm girl!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed on October 1, 2007
Karla~

That is a picture of you on your cleaning tear...LOL When you get on a tear, you get on a TEAR! LOL Very well done; love the funnel pic! Superb!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Love the poem, too; I can feel the excitement in your words! I am excited too, no I am excited FOR you! Glad I can be a part of your joy! :)

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2007
Dear Karla, my thoughts and prayers are with you,God Bless, love Holly


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