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All They Want
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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We owe them ....

They are sent off to war, with cheers
and flag waving patriotism by those
too old or cowardly to do the dirty
work themselves.

They are sent to the battlefields, our
sons and daughters, husbands and
wives, fathers and mothers willing to
take a stand.

They are brought home in flag-draped
caskets or on stretchers, those with a
thousand yard stare, broken in body
and in mind.

They are our Veterans, heroes all, who
gave all they had to give and more, who
are wounded once by war, again by our
forgetting.

Shame on us.  This the price for their
sacrifice?  They paid a price too great
to bear.  We're free because of them.
We owe them.

We owe them a debt of gratitude, of
respect, of honor.  They don't ask for
much.  All they want is promises made to
be fulfilled.

Is that asking for too much?  Well, is it?

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (11/11)


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 Reviews of "All They Want"
Reviewed on December 3, 2008
Hello Karla,

Bravo on this moving piece . . . so well prosed!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 12, 2007
Nope, ain't asking too much at all.

Walt

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2007
Don't get me started. Nothing is more disgraceful than the way the American soldier is treated when he comes home and hangs up his or her uniform.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 12, 2007
All they want is to returne
get the respect owe them,
their vets benefits without red tape
To face the world once againg as before the war
To return home in one piece
and his or her love ones waiting,
Love & Pieace

William

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 12, 2007
Hey! don't rake they down, those poor bastards only wanted for our soldiers to help their limousines tanks to be filled, that's all.
The billions they made was and "unexpected" bonus.
The Veterans will get a very very friendly shrug of their shoulders.
Georg

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
They should be treated much better.
Great write Karla..
With love,
Ron

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
"They don't ask for much. All they want is promises made to be fulfilled. Is that asking for too much? Well, nis it?" No Karla, it's not asking for too much; it's asking for too little. They deserve so much better than what they get. Far more.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
Yes, we the people of this fine land owe all of them a debt. Keep them in your hearts and minds all year long, not just for one day. Sadly it is written in the history of this country to down play all our troops when they are not needed. They are left ignored, shamed and lied to. Promises, promises and give them nothing. Our government does a fine job handing out lip service, but true gratitude is difficult to find. I salute each and every one....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
Your sincerity is most rewarding to those who have not only given the ultimate sacrifice but to those who still suffer the ailments of injury and emotional turmoil that wars bring...

They are truly brave at heart...

Great tribute Karla...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
What they deserve is GRATITUDE AND RESPECT.

Fee
PS Not trying to rub it in but did you watch my man Jimmie win his fourth consecutive race today....wow

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
Is that asking too much??? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Blood-stirring write, Karla, that calls for an answer. The shame is that we are not pressing for justice each and every day, not just on Vets Day... except for those stalwarts whose voices in support are NEVER silent. Yours is a voice to be reckoned with... and I hope you get the right answer where it counts... Love Kate xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
Another well done poem Karla, that should give us all pause to think again about just how great the sacrifice! They deserve all and more than they've been promised.

ET

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
Wonderful write indeed! Yes, they selflessly fight to protect everyone of their country. May God bless them always!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
i think you are awesome -thank you for this write

Reviewed on November 11, 2007
Karla~

We are free because of them, our veterans. We owe TEHM. We owe them all the benefits due--and then some. NOTHING is too good for them. Powerfully stated; this needs to be shouted from the rooftops! And sent to Washington to our congressmen, our govrnment, our President!! Very well penned; brava, Veteran--and THANKS! God blss our military might, past, present, AND future!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your (grateful) twin sister, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
I don't know what promises they were given, but it matter not, you are correct that vetrans are most often given the short stick and not treated with the respect they deserve . . . Thank you for the poem . . .

Reviewed by Glen Schulz
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
They should be treated the way our politicians are treated. A lifelong pension, the best health care, and all the respect we can give them. Why have we allowed our politicians to give THEMSELVES these things that they don't deserve and NOT give them to our vets, who DO deserve? Fine job Karla. *Glen*

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
Shame on us.

Shame on Us All, and Shame on Our Leaders, Who Always Begrudge Allocating Our Valiant Veterans Sufficient Funds For Their Health, Housing, and Disability Needs When They Return Home.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
Those who speak out against our fight for freedom and still live, work and play here; who still have their freedom of speech are hypocrits for had they been in the countries they speak for, they wouldn't have the right to say a word.
Honor is a word rich in American history. Valor, bravery and freedon go hand in hand in the allegiance all fighting men and women take. I wish we Americans could take our oaths more often than a thought.
Love and indeed! God! Bless America!

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 11, 2007
The longest poem I've read of yours dear Karla. The sentiments of a true patriot. I salute you!
Blessings and love ...
Richard


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