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the Terror
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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hee hee :)

... the Terror invades my night, on stormswept
winds howling in from the north.  The seas
that are the bed toss and turn, hurling
me out of the dream I was having
and onto the floor.  The rattling
of windows, the flash!boom!!
of thunder rolls me around
until the brain unsticks,
slaps me stupid:  a
nightmare.  That's
all it was.  You
big dummy!
Go back
to bed.
Idjit.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (11/15)


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 Reviews of "the Terror"
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
LOL this is to funny, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on November 15, 2007
Not only a good description, but a very fun description of the nightmare experience...Jerry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 15, 2007
And I hope you slept well.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 15, 2007
lol,,very funny, and cleaver,,
Christine

Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci
Reviewed on November 15, 2007
This poem give me a new slant on the fine thread between dreams and reality
Nicely done

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 15, 2007
Funny, with intense descriptions! I enjoyed this read greatly! ~Sheila

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 15, 2007
Karla, thunder is only the noise St. Peter make after a meal of beans.
Nothing to be afraid of, just don't breathe.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
hah-good trick at the end!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
But Karla I love the rain
I sleep like a baby when it's storming
with thunder and lightning, and the rain drops
pelting my rooftop
To me it's like a lullaby.

Peace & love be with you
William

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Terror invades your night
giving you an awful fright
but think of what's to come
for tomorrow you'll laught at
at the thought of coming undone

God bless you, and sweet dreams. Kathy

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Dayum if you aren't getting very creative and I love it!

Keep them coming.
Love and blessings,
Susan

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
A unique way of presenting your words and sentiments, Karla. Well done. You manage to grasp humor in the grip of a nightmare. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Wow. Now that's art!!
R~

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
God, I do hate when that happens...It takes me forever to fall asleep and the slightest sound to wake me up...in your case a bad dream! Had me going there for a min...
Enjoyed~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
LIke this one and the way you presented it. Well done.

fee

Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Cool look for this poem, love it. Lots of energy in this write.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Shapes annd designs out of thought . . . Gotta love it . . .

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Love the style and the imagery! You are soaring Karla;-) YAY!!!

ET

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Not only am I impressed with your poem, but with the triangular shape you've built. Very origional. Glad it was a nightmare!!

Reviewed on November 14, 2007
This is too funny, Karla! Very well written; enjoyed!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Karla, are you scaring yourself to death? You know very well if you hear that thunderous roar at the door it will be Thor,and should he come in crouch under the bed, and unto the floor. You must be teasing that poor fellow,wanting to come by that often, are you?
Stay safe and Bless You! Jasmin Horst


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