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The Patient Is Awake, Doctor
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Back online...back in business! LOL

The patient is awake, Doctor: 
surgery a complete success.
Computer restored, refreshed; its

color, better than before, thanks
to a new monitor; vital
signs stable; the mouse that came back

to life purring like a kitten,
thanks to a friend who knew how to
fix what I had crashed ... best of all,

no charge for the house call.  Something
else to be grateful for this week,
as we celebrate Thanksgiving.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (11/17)
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 Reviews of "The Patient Is Awake, Doctor"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 19, 2007
Well done!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 19, 2007
excellent
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on November 18, 2007
CONGRATULATIONS, Karla. Glad you got it fixed.
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 18, 2007
Outstanding news, Karla!
love and peace, Carole~
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 18, 2007
The PC you refer to is about Problems Compounded? if so, am happy that it went Problems Comcluded.
Ha!!!
Georg
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 18, 2007
no charge for the house call

Now that is something truly rare, these days, and most definitely something to be thankful for.
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 18, 2007
the mouse that came back to life purring like a kitten,
Funny......

Walt
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed on November 18, 2007

Subjected developed into a picture of gratitude and cooperative attitude of humanity and fraternity... "The Patient Is Awake, Doctor"
has delivered a great message.

I salute You, Poet.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
God Bless you and bless your computer Guru too for the helping hand....

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
yeah!!! good news
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Nice to see you again,,HUgsssssssss
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Amazing write, this is amazing, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Welcome back, good luck with the new and improved computer!
Peace, Love, and Light
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Everything needs a rest now and then Karla. I enjoyed your poem and was pleased to know the patient survived...Good work...JDM
Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
It surely would be a loss - you without a computer means AD without your creativity, wit, sincerity, pathos, love, etc, etc, etc,
Whew! That was a close one!

Love,
Connie
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
A little assistance was all it took . . . Good . . .
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Karla~

Isn't technilogical science wonderful?? Glad the mouse (let alone our computer) can live another day! Thank GOD for people with the know-how to undo the damage you did! LOL Just don't try to update anything else; leave it to the experts who know what they are doing!
Very well written; enjoyed this one! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
Happy to hear your mouse is well in hand
Computer crash reparied, wow been there a few times
That's an agonizing reappraisal
Peace & Love be with you

William


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