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OW
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Know what they say: laughter's good for whatever ails you. Trying to laugh despite the pain ... but ... OW

Back went out with the
morning laundry.
Spine stiff as if it
were starched, the muscles
neatly fold me in
half ... nerve unraveled,
undone by the Tide ...
Should have stayed in bed.  LOL

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (12/8)


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 Reviews of "OW"
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
Beleieve me I can relate, excellent write
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
Stay in bed, by yourself, don't let Karla join you...or more pain you will feel...E

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
This is one I understand well Karla...hope you get relief soon
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
Should, coulda, woulda...wish we could see the future and prepare better but life is full of ups and downs. I hope and pray your back gets repaired promptly.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
Ahh, jeez... It's a funny write but I can only imagine that the pain is not!!
Stay in bed and lick your wounds, sister!! Our thoughts will help,
R~

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
I'll end Ben Gay right over! You poor dear! I know how this feels, it isn't fun.
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
I just got over a bad bout of Sciatica and my wife still made me do the laundry. I empathize my dear.
Rusty

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
ohh-i am so sorry but to appreciate the humor in you!!

Reviewed on December 8, 2007
Feel pity. But it was nice that you did the laundry and had the Tide done.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
LOL...very cute, Karla! I love the play on words, very clever. ~ Sara

Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
I have back pain from time to time. I have problems in the Lumbar region. I guess I need to go to the lumbar yard and get it fixed.

Larry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
Undone by the Tide! Laughter truly is the Best Medicine. Now go back to bed!

Reviewed on December 8, 2007
To paraphrase the title of this poem: "OW"! LOL

You have a way of making MY joints/back hurt. THANK you! LOL *OW* Quit doin' that, will you?? I know, I know--I can't do any heavy lifting, so you're left to do it for me. I'm sorry...I Wish I could help...Excellent little poem of big pain. Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( *OW*

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 8, 2007
Haha!!! "undone by the Tide" . . . Gotta love it . . .


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