The Unhinging (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 25, 2008

Sibs so close. Enjoying the company of each other with wild things to enjoy. I envy your relationship with your sister. Savor every moment. Funny adventure penned poetically. I like it. I see that you have penned more poems than the total of my poem's words. I am in awe. Sincerely, Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

This is adorable. You sisters need to get together and write the big one... Her with little anecdotes, you with occasional verse-- it would be fab. --Charlie

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

Loopy you might be, dear Karla. But I do looove your smirky smile!
You both are soooo lucky to have each other!
Love to you and sis!!
Becca~

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

Love the picture!!!!!! Great write.. hang in there , you're lucky to have a sis!......M

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

When lightning come out of your ears...I know I am doing something right for a change!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

This was fun, and you and Karen have "guts!" I notice I'm becoming a "chicken" in my old age....smile. Love the photo, too, Karla!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

having a fling as a daredevil makes for a whimsical poem!;-) Great pic!Karen you are a hoot!;-)

Love,
ET

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

you survived...........
adorable write
anita :)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Hi Karla:

I've often wondered about this pictur. Great artwork!!! Heeeheee!
And great poem to match too.

((((( Love and hugs )))))

Sandie May Joyce :o)

P.S. Don't forget to let me know what day in February you are going live on the TV, I will miss anything, but NOT this one. Please tell me at least a few days ahead so I can be sure to stay home to watch you girls.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

R-o-l-l-e-r c-o-a-s-t-e-r-i-n-g...sure can bring out the sparks in a girl.
Love and blessings!
Susan

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

between the two of you is an amazing balance...one feels the terror the other the thrill....to live is to know them both...well done

luv the squiggle on the pic!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Well, if the result is some zinging poetry and an even more fizzing picture, then Karen is certain to be thanked! How do we know we have wings until pushed off the edge of that cliff, now?! As long as your eyeballs are still in place and your glasses intact, then I reckon the experience will have been a sure-fire heart-thriller... and we can certainly do with a few of those in life! who's for the DeathSlide?! LOL Karousel Kate xx Compared to braving storms... NO trouble! xxx :))

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

WOW, this would have scared me to death...I'm so afraid of rides! Loved this picture too!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Eeeeekkkk! what a ride and what a picture. Thoroughly enjoyed. Liz

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

You two are so lucky to have each other...I just love your stories..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

...a spin off with "twin-ges"...of sisterly love.
great one Karla...
John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Reminds me of when I went on The Wild Thing at Valley Fair,, for my son,,,, Never Again lol

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

This is an excellent write, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Well brotherly love or not you wouldn't have gotten me on there lol

Fee

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

hee, hee... I love it! Sisters can get us into so much trouble!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Oh, dear Karla, the things we do for love! Many blessings to you and Karen.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

fun write--i would be tossing my cookies i am afraid!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYY!!! LOL

I'm not THAT mean now, am I?? *HEE* Yeah, yeah, I know...but YOU didn't have to listen to ME! LOL But you did; so it's your fault!! Not mine!! LOL Okay, well maybe not totally...Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Enjoyed this. Brought back memories. Siblings have a way of getting one into trouble. Seems as though it was always something stirred up between my two brothers or my sister. We had fun though.
Love and {{{{{{hugs}}}}}}},
Leland

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

this is great, Oh, I envy you having a sister. Just keep loving her. Be safe, Bonnie

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Sometimes ya just have to go it alone! twin or no twin...:)
BUT! We love you both! :) Funny pen and pic!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~