W)hindering (5/7/5 Format) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 31, 2008

An intense feeling, as you hold back the winds
and write it explicitely Karla!
Warmest Blessings and Love, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheoxoo

STay Positive!
Blessings as YOU GO FORWARD!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Karla I can feel the force of the wind as I read your words. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

...forceful thoughts Karla.
well done...
John

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

timely write--windy here too

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Well done
Ron

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

St5ep forward two and back one. It's like swimming in a circle and sometimes we still keep trying to get ahead.
Love and blessings.
Susan

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Splendid write, sounds like everyone is having big winds, its due here tomorrow...
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Ugh not fun, we had storms last week that brought along winds, got a semi clear day today FINALLY, but more storms do to come in...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Eat less baked beans...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

sounds bad....had bad winds last week....seems like mom nature needs some mood change again!!

Love Tinka :)_

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

"stop.ped"....very clever, Karla!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Yep. I agree with Cryssa . . . Impressive . . .

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Interesting and well formed.

Fee

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

I like it! I especially like your use of "stop.ped" to describe the mime.
:~)
Cryssa

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

This one make me feel like a kite in the wind...

Georg

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

quite creative...nice work.

cheers,
dan

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Delightful write, Karla; love the title and the image! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twinklies, Karen Lynn. :D

Love the title; clever!!

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on January 28, 2008

Keep going my friend, you are making headway. Wonderfully penned. Love, Bonnie