Sandman Passed Me By (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

I hope the snoring wasn't off key, you sure had a lot of sound effects! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed on February 17, 2008

Karla,
I like the contrast in this poem; "...hearing thunder roll amid the sound of gentle snoring." Well done! Love and Hugs*
Sheila

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

sounds like you were well entertained, lol,, Cute write!

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

Hope the sandman let you have a rest today and I hope that the weather left you alone to dream peacefully while you slumbered.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

The "Sandman", a fickle friend. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

...and there are nights when the sandman...lets me build castles...dreams...within an hourglass...tiny grains of eternity.
wishing you the best Karla...
John

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

Perhaps a wee cup of sleepy time tea would have helped ye... M

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

Having fibromyalgia, the sandman and I are not on good terms, so I appreciated this! It was written as if we, the reader, were right beside you. Blessings and long nights of snoring to you, lol! Michelle

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

Welcome to my world Karla, the Sandman passes me by everynight as I suffer with lack of est nightly. Thanks for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

don't you just hate it when that happens? take an afternoon nap and enjoy sweet dreams.

peace,
dan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

I can ALWAYS sleep, even if I just awoke in the morning, I can wait an hour and go back to sleep...tis' sometimes ones only refuge...Ed

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

Metallica lyrics come to mind... sorry I'm being morbit this morning, lol.

Hush little baby, dont say a word
And never mind that noise you heard
Its just the beast under your bed,
In your closet, in your head...

Becca~

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

A great write my friend, that old sandman passed me by as well this week on more than one occasion, I've had trouble sleeping as there's been much on my mind...you've nailed this one, hope you get some rest tonight. I think I've finally got caught up on a few ZZZzzzz myself!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

someone has to stand watch
And you elected yourself
ZZZZZZZZZZZZ! hush now! don't you cry
Peace be with you
May the Sandman bless you next time around

William

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

Very cute writing sweet lady,stay safe and well...Hugsssssss

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

And I bet you know who the snorer is...Me. Sorry 'bout that! LOL

Cute write; well penned! Here's hoping you get the needed rest tonight! Ahh, such as life here in Texas: instead of snow, we get severe weather. NOT good!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D *snoooooooore* LOL

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 16, 2008

Don't ya just love it, when they snore!!