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One Track Mind
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Lousy conversationalist - LOL

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After weather, what is there
to talk about?  Could discuss
aches and pains, but think I should
leave them where they are, hidden
under a thin veneer of

Tylenol, why bring them up?
Could talk politics - no, best
not - want to remain friends.  Hmm. 
What else, besides the weather?
Should have seen it:  the pouring

rain, the lightning, heard the roll
of thunder - glad it wasn't the roar
of a tornado.  Could have
been, if conditions had come
together.  And that rainbow!

The largest and brightest I
had ever seen, hung against
the dark of storms, passed.  It was
lovely - just glad it didn't
get as bad as they said it

was going to - mean, we were
under a moderate risk
of severe (which means we would
probably get it).  Wait.  We
were not going to talk - did

you see that TV program?
No - all I saw was the news,
all bad.  Never mind.  What books
have you read, lately?  Jodi
Picoult's "The Tenth Circle" is

what I'm reading; before that,
"Big Weather" by Mark Svenvold.
There I go again - can't
help myself.  After weather
what is there to talk about?

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (2/17)

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 Reviews of "One Track Mind"
Reviewed by Selene Skye
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
A delightful, captivating spin!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
That's my girl!!! write, and if anyone says anything about lousy conversations you send them to me, and I will whip them with a few haiku lashes to teach them a little disipline...

Georg

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
I believe with as much diversity as you all have in the weather...then the subliminal affects make poetry robust and a different kind of passion.
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
the weather is usually an opener in conversations between my dad and i--we then go on to other topics--

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
I love the rambling conversation in this... and it shows you don't have a one track mind. :~)
But... I also love your weather "reports" and I look for them every day, to see if you are okay.
I think so many of our moods can be described with weather too... Feeling stormy, feeling blustery, feeling hot or cold...

So do we describe weather with our feelings or our feelings with the weather?

Hmmm...
Thinking on that..
Cryssa

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
Wonderful writing sweet lady...stay safe and well..HUgssssss

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
umm... how you like your tea... how the roses are doing... the things the kids get up to these days... I'm amazed that your lines of conversation sound so British! On the other hand, HOW many words do the Inuit have for "snow"? I think you could make a whole Stormspinner lexicon for the degrees of wind and wuthering or heat and frying that you experience waaaaaaay down South there... Wet n' Windy could be.... Wendy... Now you got me on the yap, too! :)) xx

Reviewed on February 17, 2008
Karla as long as you keep writing about it, we know you're ok, and that the wind hasn't blown you away, and that's a good thing isn't it. Hugs and Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
This is a change of pace for you Karla, and I love it!
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
Karla, You are so entertaining and have such a wit about you,,, Just keep reporting to us whatever you may.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
I'm gonna have to agree with Felix. I do like your weather reports very much, but I also enjoy your sparkling sense of sensuality at times.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
It's always what we seem to talk about when we run out of things to say, isn't it?

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
...and Karla...whether or not there is something other to talk about? ...not just you...the weather is an addiction spoken of most every man...not enough rehab clinics in the world...to break one of this habit. You wet our appetites and drizzle our thoughts...with your creative rainbow of words.
John

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
I love the rain - the cleansing. I love how you spin a lovely tale of the weather. Plus, it is a safe topic for conversation - for sure.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
perhaps being a stormspinner gives you little choice. Your picture album of storms must be over flowing. Perhaps learning to place some poems within them you could sell some really neat cards that way. LJ

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
I like Fee's review and Charlie's too Nothing to add to those.

Walt

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
It is always the main topic when you run into your neighbor,"Hi,how ya doin, chilly today..." Yeah it is can't wait for spring, i'm okay how about you..." you're right Karla, keep forecasting;-)


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Reviewed on February 17, 2008
Here in Texas, the weather is a common theme because it changes so blamed fast! *If you don't like the weather, wait five minutes--it'll change". Ain't it the (gospel) truth! LOL Very well penned, brava, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
I love how you'd cliff hang, and then begin a new subject-- that's just how my mind works, going off on perpetual tangents-- can't hold down a conversation... Good job. --Charlie

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
I think you are fascinated by the weather and choose it as your conversation and poetry topic but I also believe you have many other different areas of experiences to share and every now and then you let one slip out and it is marvellous.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed on February 17, 2008
Karla, what comes your way hits my house within 20-30 minutes, if the wind is a Southwester. And most storms/rains come from that direction.

Had a few boomers and hail yest. afternoon, and you didn't warn me :o) But the rain was surely welcomed. Glad we can talk about the weather...LOL
So...how've you been; whatcha been eatin'? Now THERE'S a good topic, girlfriend: FOOD! :o)

Micke

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
You need a dog like Rufuz, he just keeps staring at you when you talk and doesn't say a word, or puts in his two cents at all...the perfect conversationalist is he...me & he

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
"No Time for Goodbye," by Linwood Barclay . . . He mentions thhe weather here and there also . . . LOL

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
Talk about the good friends you have here at the Den.
Talk, talk, Ms. Karla meteorologist.
Lurve you
Ron

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
It is the safest subject I agree, great job showing it. You are my favorite weather forcaster. Love, Bonnie


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