Tanka: Bow[e]ls of Thunder (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

Cute!
Hope he stopped his rumbling!
Cryssa

Reviewed on April 15, 2008

There's no intention of harm in any cloud or raindrop...especiaslly to you dear Karla. My associates fly to and from Houston all the time. They are either fealess or....well...you know. <smile>

love,
Susan

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 14, 2008

Your pictures and poems will make a great book some day.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on April 14, 2008

Great picture and words....M

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 14, 2008

So, that's all the growling is about? the skies are hungry? should we put cookies and a glas of milk outside, like we do with Santa?

Georg

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

How can you resist that smile. He (or she) wants you! :)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

Too cute but I think by the look of the sky you would only at most serve as an appetizer. Hugs
Fee

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

...maybe some Sugar Smacks...might take care of the hunger and knock some sense into it Karla...
good one...
John

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

Thor opens and closes the doors in the sky quite loudly at times. Be safe. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

Sky shaking (his belly-laugh), and hunger making all sorts of rumbling sounds... My shoulders are shaking reading this... too-too funny-- much, much better than the original. Amazing the things our fingers turn up! --Charlie

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

This ia great write, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

Karla,

I know humor isn't foremost but sometimes it helps. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

Very cute Karla.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

Cute one, Karla!

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

Karla, this is cute. It gave me a laugh. Thanks for the humor.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

Wow those clouds sure would have me running for cover. Glad I don't see them around our neck of the woods too often. To understand fear one must face it first.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

It is nice to see you finding humor during a storm, I know how you hate the thunderstorms.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

Eat Garlic, then it will think your french... You'll deffo be safe then...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

love this bit of humor!

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

interaction with our surroundings (wondrous) evol smaerd _ Ted

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

That sky looks like a colon, twisting in pain! *OW* LOL

What a clever write; can we say "severe thunderstorm warning for Belly County"?? LOL Super job; very well written/illustrated! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on April 13, 2008

Give it what ever it wants Karla, maybe a bowl of jello just don't let it eat you. Love this as always, LOL Love, Bonnie