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Premeditated (Thoughts of Murder)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Trying to get out of this depression I've been feeling since Daddy died.

This literally popped into my head - can't help it - gotta squeeze - gotta - sometimes squeeze a bit too hard.

Dang. Killed another one. LOL

... I can't wait to get it in my hands.
I want to squeeze and squeeze and
s q u e e z e until its eyes bug out and
its breath leaves in a solitary satisfying
P  O  P -------------------------- bubble wrap

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (6/7)

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Premeditated (Thoughts of Murder)"
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
Through your writing you find release of the deep hurt, one letter at a time....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
I feel you girl, you go right ahead and pop those eyes out, gotta let it out somehow!lol

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
ha, ha, haa.....
Karla, your creativity astounds me!
Pop away!!
Cryssa

Reviewed on June 8, 2008
Karla it hurt bigtime and writing helps it helps so keep writing. your Dady is with you in spirit and ill guid you in your writing
In Sympathy
Tuchy

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
not a bad way to get rid of some frustration!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
cute Karla.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
Tension released at the expense of another packaging bubble! You are quite the clever one Karla. May peace find and embrace you. JMW

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
They should pack bubble wrap as stress relief and perhaps market it as such.

Fee

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
Then you will enjoy this...

http://www.therightfoot.net/mystuff/whatever/swf/bubblewrap.swf

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
Karla don't make me go there and spank your tushy into reason.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
This brought a smile to my face, Karla! I just love that stuff...lol

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
Sweetie, maybe it will to not look at Daddy as having been taken out of your life. See him as going on ahead to prepare the way for you, as he has always done.

Bubble wrap :-) Yeah Buddy ... they MADE that stuff for me! Pop pop pop ...

Smiles-n-hugs
Ted

Reviewed on June 7, 2008
Great write here Karla I am here for you
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
Whatever works for you sweetie ... Hang in there babydoll ... hugs - T

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
...excellent, excellent write Karla... and P O P...in a different way...pop...addressing your father.
great work...
John

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
A universal activity! ;-) And a good metaphor too.

Axilea

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
I sometimes enjoy this too, Karla, but without the emotion. :) Try jumping on them. That's fun too. How about popping balloons? Better be careful though. You might graduate into slashing tires. :))

Reviewed on June 7, 2008
Karen,

An odd way to try and rid yourself of the pain. Whatever works!

Mary

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
as they say whatever does it for ya;-) seriously I know the pain,you remind me of when I lost my father, wjom I dearly loved and he was also a best friend to me...Rough going, but it soes lessen with time

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
I'm with you, Karla. I never saw a bubble wrap
I could - pop - resist. - Gene.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
Well, the title reminded me of my book, Violent Visions of Murder, but when I read the poem I realized your murderous need was quite innocent. Cute and humorous.

Reviewed on June 7, 2008
Great way to relieve sadness or stress, Karla! ADORable write; enjoyed~ BRAVA, very well written with a sense of humor!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
Actually, very good therapy - keep squeezin, and poppin.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
Cute Karla, did not know or imagine where it was going. Great suspense. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
I love this! Your title captivated me and reeled me in like trout! Held me captive from the first word to the last! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed on June 7, 2008
Hahaha!!!!! LOL!!!!! They're addictive, aren't they? I like to pop them too whenever I get my hands on them.

Sandie Angel :o)


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