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Why Won't You Let Him In?
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Don't check in where you can't check out: know before you go.

Thank You, Jesus, and Pastor Mark, for the inspiration behind these words. Might not make me popular, but O, well -- not ashamed. :)

If you don't like the heat, why are
you bent and determined to spend
eternity in Hell?  Think it's
gonna be party time with friends ---

what if they decided not to
come?  Weeping.  Wailing.  Gnashing of
teeth:  torment.  You get angry, ask,
'Why would the God you say is love

build such a place?'  He didn't mean
if for humans; it was for the
devil, fallen angels.  Due to
the Fall of man, that's where we'll be

unless we repent.  Wages of
sin:  death.  For God so loved the world
--- He knew sacrifice.  His Only
Son --- for you.  ME.  Jesus unfurled

bright ribbons of hope, red as blood ---
He died so we wouldn't have to.
Now He lives --- knocks at the door.  Why
won't you let Him in?  Why do you

not believe?  The gift of Life is
free --- can't earn.  Can't be good enough ---
I wasn't.  I'm not.  He showed the
Way --- Faith:  the evidence of stuff

not seen, nor heard.  I believe --- that's
all He wants, you, as you are right
now --- now is the time to call on
the Name of Jesus --- Hell's a fright.

Whom will you serve?  Think carefully
--- your final boarding call will be
announced sooner than you think.  So ---
where will you spend ETERNITY?

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (6/8)

 

 


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 Reviews of "Why Won't You Let Him In?"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 10, 2008
From your heart a message of love, truth and inspiration for all. God bless. JMW

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
You reached deep for this pointed and very inspirational tale, one told through honesty and purity of what may lie ahead.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
How I love Jesus! and this poem is extremely inspiring!

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
...wonderful write of inspiration Karla...you share with us.
excellent...
John

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
Way to go, Karla! A wake up call indeed ... Wonderfully written sweetie ... hugs - Tiana

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
An inspired call to believe,that shares your gift of faith,
which is a joy to observe!Splendid Karla! ET

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
Karla, you outdid yourself... a perfect package...thought provoking, meaningful message, and great writing...
Your faith shines through your words.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
A different write you share with us today, I feel your heart and soul is in every word. Great write, thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
Beautiful inspirational writing, Karla.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
I do believe too, and feel we are so close to the end times and the returning of the Savior. What we have to go through before he comes is not known, but he will heal the nation in his time. Inspirations come to me through this poem, and i pity those who don't believe and wait til it is too late. There has to be a God or how did everything fall into place as it is.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
Why won't you let Him in? Why do you not believe? The gift of Life is free --- can't earn. Can't be good enough --- Well said Karla and all too true. Just wish Jesus would come back soon; like now would be a good time as far as I'm concerned. We just need to save as many more souls as humanly possible between now and then. Well done my friend and sister. Your brother in Jesus from New Hampshire.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
Direct and clear message here. Ears that hear not; eyes...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
I believe. What a wonderful inspirational poem. Liz

Reviewed on June 8, 2008
Hey Karla:

This is away from your normal style of the weather watch, but this is so good. I'm also sensing a lot of emotions here.

Take care, and be well.

Lots of love,

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
A very inspiring and heartfelt write my friend...you are right, Hell wasn't intended for any of His children...it's their choice if they make a reservation for that place! Very inspiring for He is always there for us! A great write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
We all need faith to get us through the tough times and sustain us. He is there , some just do'nt accept him,, its their tragic loss....M

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
Good to have a strong faith; maybe when you get up there with God you can put in a good word for me, though I kinda think God is looking forward to sending me to the hot place (as long as its hot and not humid,LOL) ED

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
Testament to your faith, Karla...individual beliefs vary widely and for good reason. All religious systems were installed from the beginning of time to guide the populace during the time we spend here on this plane of life. Not a rag of superstition or falsity should deter one in their own religious and spiritual beliefs. It is all written in the power of monotheism through archaeological evidence, such as Egyptian chiselings. It is important to save religious freedoms and preserve all temples of religion with dignity. Be well you and Karen Lynn...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed on June 8, 2008
This is very similar to the message I heard today, we went to visit Sister Ruths church and the Sermon was amazing.
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed on June 8, 2008
Karla this is right on the money he is here for us we just do not ask even the most religious of us
Thanks for reminding me
God Bless you Karla
Tuchy

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
nce, someone asked me how sure I was that God is a He and not a She, because all the scriptures where written by men and a Mother would never ever let one of Her children burn without trowing Herself into the flames to save Her offspring....
Some to think about?

Georg

Reviewed on June 8, 2008
Wow, Karla~

Quite a different direction from you, but o, so powerful! Great way to witness, through the power of God-inspired words! Very well penned; I pray those that don't know the Lord, those who read these words, will take the message behind this to heart, that they come to the Saving Blood of Jesus! That would be awesome! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :)

I am so glad you and I know the Lord as our Lord and Saviour! :D

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
A heart is like a garden and God is the one that can blossom inside of a person and make them better human beings.Lovely poem

Edwin

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
A very inspirational write, Kara. Turning over a new leaf in life paves the road to all things good. Blessings.


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