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Hotter'n ... Well, You Know
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The air folds under the weight
of a summer sun, pressing
down on reddened flesh.  All
is stilled in humidity's hush;
nothing moves except these
words to describe it (& even
that breaks me out in a sweat):
too hot to do anydamnthing.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (6/30)

 


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 Reviews of "Hotter'n ... Well, You Know"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 4, 2008
LOL! Strong descriptions and a definite sense of humor mix beautifully! Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
I can relate!! I know this kinda heat too darn well. Excellent write dear friend. hugs to yah
Chezza

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 2, 2008
Karla, it's not too hot here, as long as you don't get more
than a shell's throw from the ocean. Sorry there's no relief
out your way. -gene.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
Summer has arrived. I know what you mean, tho we do get some respite from a small breeze every now and then........M

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
Karla, here in Milan it's been over 90...although we've had a storm last night that cooled things off a bit. But I'm not complaining! I love this weather!

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Guess I liked summer as does any kid. But now, give me fall and its joys.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
No, I don't know, but i hear ya bout humidity...to a small degree it broke here over night with a tremendous t-storm that awoke me which is unusual...but still when I vacuumed the Jeep and cleaned the camper I did sweat like a well, you know...;) ed

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Summer, my weather. But it can be oppressive at times with high heat and high humidity. Count the blessings under your star. JMW

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
I feel that way in the sauna, too. :)

Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Splendid job. Love how you play words

Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Just reading this poem is making me sweat!! Quick!! Give me some lemonade or some air conditioning, STAT!! LOL Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your (sweaty) twin, Karen Lynn. :P *pant, pant, pant* LOL

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Cute Karla. Well done.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Boy have you got that right, capturing the moment well....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Then that is what you should do,,lol,,,, Creative you are :)

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
Great writing sweet lady,as always enjoyed..sorry I haven't been commenting been ill..and will be away for a few weeks hopefully I will heal thank you so much for all your sweet comments on my poems,and know you and your twin sister will always be in my thought's sweet lady..please stay safe and well OK I will miss you...Hugs
Love,
Chanti Lace

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
When it gets that hot time for daydreaming or snoozing;-0
Good one,you made me feel the heat!...ET

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
It is frying here too in ATL...

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
We have it really nice here today just enough of a breeze to sit back and enjoy. Time for you ladies to stay in, run a cool bath and pretend you are at the beach. lol
Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
It's been pretty hot and humid here in Connecticut, 90's and evenings don't seem to cool off much these nights. I loved your poem and the photo very awesome, Karla.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
It is hot here too 90's daytime, just about 70 nights, which is very humid but I like it. I am a hot weather fan.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 30, 2008
yes, it sure is--well expressed!


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