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The Ogress Chronicles: Storm Stew
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... Too little and it will boil over; too much and chaos will result. ....

Image (c) 2008, Karla Dorman


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She took down some cloud from the
shelf and folded the sky in two:  one
half clear, the other clotted with wind

and rain.  She stirred the whole thing
with a lightning bolt until it thundered
--- she vaguely remembered her Mom

telling her that was when it could get
tricky.  About that time, she heard a
sound behind her:  it was only Daddy.

He sniffed the air and said, "Is that
what I think it is?  Storm Stew?"  She
pushed him out of the kitchen:  "You

ruined the surprise!  You've been
working so hard and I wanted to do
something nice."  All of a sudden,

something flew past her ear and
stuck into the wall!  Oh, no .... her
mother's warning came back clearly

now:  You have to be careful how you
stir, Daughter.  Too little and it will boil
over; too much and chaos will result. 

Either way, there would be a mess.
She, with Daddy in tow, ran back into
the kitchen.  A tornado greeted them,

a BIG one, the largest they'd ever seen.
If it got loose .... folks still talked about
'96 like it had happened yesterday.

And that's why they hadn't eaten Storm
Stew in a while.  Daddy took off his
coat (a prodigious size) and waved it

in front ot the twister.  She couldn't help
it:  she began to laugh:  what did Daddy
think he was, a bullfighter or something?

He was trying to shoo it back into the
pot, but it wanted nothing to do with it.
Besides, the tornado had other plans ...

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (8/9)

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 Reviews of "The Ogress Chronicles: Storm Stew"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on August 13, 2008
LOL...Karla. Well told! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
A well prepared dish for us, Karla, and you serve up the metaphor beautifully.
John

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
Great read karla
Your friend...with love
Ron
SMooooooooooooooCH!

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
To quote the late Frank Zappa: "Wowie Zowie!" It's a kid's book with amazing, evocative pictures, or, maybe, it's a nightmare. Again, the accompanying picture is amazing. You have a view of sky with no wires, you lucky lady!

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
I enjoyed your storm stew, but what I enjoyed most was the cameraderie of a loving family and the cute thought about Daddy waving his coat at a twister and Mom laughing at him. Nicely done.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
Gotta love it Karla! You add delight and whimsy to the chronicles,with a good sense of humor!;-)...ET

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
I love a good storm, though a tornado is a bit more than I care to have served up on my plate. We are in monsoon season here, so wild winds and raging thunderstorms have been the soup du joir for the last month or so. Clever poem, Karla, nicely done.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
LOL! Delightful poem, Karla! Hmmm, I do love Storm Stew when it's made to perfection and served on a hot hot summer day. Yes, a good downpour (welcomed after weeks of hot, scorchy, sticky days) is marvelous!

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
Love this, Karla. So much fun, and you cook it up so well.
I won't ask for the recipe. -gene.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
very creative!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
Very well done ,enjoyed sweet Karla...stay safe and well..Hugsssssssssss

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
Your work can make one smile even when a storm is brewing...nicely written poem Karla...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
I love this Storm Stew poem, you made me laugh this morning.. Thank you I needed that..
Much peace, love, and light, (so good to have time to read and comment again!)
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
--marvelous Karla! -- so creative again -- I wish my imagination was so boundless -- keep sharing these great works with us -- God bless -- JMW

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
Love this series Karla it is really interesting and full of such strong visual images in each verse. Well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
Besides, the tornado had other plans ...

They usually do, but I enjoyed your Storm Stew.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
I was figuring your Daddy in this ones as a real Yosemite Sam! ! !

Georg

Reviewed on August 9, 2008
Karla, this is cleverly written; you tell quite the tale in verse! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sis, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on August 9, 2008
I love your Ogress Chronicles Karla, thank you for sharing, and keep writing, know you are in my thoughts and prayers
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on August 9, 2008
Karla... you kill me! A regular Pecos Bill-- cloud-hopper! I love it. Piggy Ink should really get on the ball with "SHE", shouldn't she? --Charlie


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