Severe Thunderstorm Warning ... (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 4, 2009

This is hilarious. When I swallow gum I suffer the same atrocity :-)
I try not to swallow it in church--don't want to drown out the preacher.

A fun write.
Linda

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on December 25, 2008

Karla, as a long time sufferer of G.E.R.D. and I.B.S. I can readily relate to your circumstance -- the excitement of Christmas has probably contributed to your tummy woes -- peace and love to you my friend -- JMW

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on December 24, 2008

LOL...too cute! ~ Sara

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

such a clever little poem!!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

This is an excellent poem, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

Good one Karla.

fee

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

Karla~!

Cleverly written dear friend . . . SUPERB!!

LOve and Hugs!

Lance

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

Well, feed it for crying out loud. Cute write Karla.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

the body can cause a storm at times Karla, have a merry xmas, LoveBwithU

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

Thank you for sharing this humorous offering, Karla. Snow is forecast here for later on today so I don't expect any thunder. Love and best wishes, ton ami de la C-B, Canada,

R�gis

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

Hi Karla,

Have you been eating the same things as I? Sounds like it.
I like how the end of your writing wraps around to make it a whole!
Missed you....
Stay Strong

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

lol. Hysterical. Great sharing. Hugs. Liz

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

Belly County, huh LOL

Karla, you are incorrigible :-)

Merry Christmas to you and Karen!!!

Ted

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

What a twist! From nature to nurture (yourself) all in one~ eg

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

My stomach yelled at me all nite long....altho sometimes I thought it was just the rain and the little sounds of thunder.... :-)) cute write. lindalaw

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

Karla, that happens a lot at this time of year. Enjoy. -gene.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

hohoho! in a santa mode are you;-) good one!

Merry Christmas,love and hugs,
Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

LOL Funny write; well done, Karla! Belly County!! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D X0X0X0X0X0

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

Understand it and treat it well. funny write

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

Oh dear! I pray Santa's brings lots of goodies to you and Karen! Happy blessed, holiday season to you both!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

I can hear those very strange rumblings from way down in Belly County, way up here in the northland!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on December 23, 2008

Feed that belly by Christmas or you'll eat too much Christmas dinner! lol. Stay safe & Merry Christmas, Karla.
Sheila