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Ole'! (5/7/5 Format)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Still waiting for a monitor ... and catching up on needed housework! LOL

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman


Poem Artwork

Calypso swaying
to fresh tropical breezes,
laundry on the line

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (5/12)


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 Reviews of "Ole'! (5/7/5 Format)"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 17, 2009
love that photograph Karla -- and your poem captures a very creative imagination as it views the mundane -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on May 14, 2009
Great poem. There's scent in the air:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 13, 2009
beautiful

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 13, 2009
This is a well written short piece that comes clean quickly. Nice job!

Dan

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on May 13, 2009
Hey, I really like that. You have poetic style and one which I can relate to so well. Hugs and prayers for new monitor. Love, J'nia

Reviewed on May 13, 2009
Hi Karla, I love this and how you can make housework so much fun! I love clean laundry, especially when it comes off the line!

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 13, 2009
OLE' Love this Karla!!!! You are truly a classic :)
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 13, 2009
Dancing with the laundry - marvelous!

Reviewed on May 13, 2009
You got this so vividly - I can relate!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 12, 2009
wonderful! hope that monitor comes through--

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 12, 2009
\love it, such a vivid image indeed.

fee

Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2009
Hi Karla
Lovely words, but does the washing keep the beat? Conjures up all sorts of funny visions. Terrific! Liz

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 12, 2009
Karla, I love this haiku with a Latin beat. -gene.

Reviewed on May 12, 2009
I love this post, and pic you are doing what Ive been doing catching up on housework LOL
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed on May 12, 2009
Ole'!! Indeed!! Great write and piccy, mi cuata! Es muy buena! :)

(((HUGS))) y amor mucho, tu cuata hermana, Karen (Carina) Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 12, 2009
tropical breezes bring good things, I hear... Hope you get your monitor soon!
Cryssa


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