What a Mess (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

hee, hee, hee... Your humor always makes me giggle...
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 6, 2009

I'm sure if you could grab those clouds aand shake the storm out you'd be glad to do the dishes Karla, cheers

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

Karla,
What can I say that hasn't already been said below? Yes, this is witty, clever, quirky and a touch surreal. Love it!
John

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

Your work is always a joy to read.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

very cool...thanks for the video too

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

Very clever my friend. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

Mother nature can be very demanding
Great write
Have a wonderful day
Ray The Buzzard

Reviewed by Stan Law (aka Stanislaw Kapuscinski)

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

Dear Karla, you never cease to amaze me

s

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

Your words paint a stormy picture, Karla...excellent use of words!
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

Ever you heard of malevolent clouds? just waiting up there for you to venture without an umbrella? but if you go out under one bet ya that a strong gust of wind will appear from nowhere to reshape it?
Oh yes! what a mess!

Georg

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

know what you mean Karla
I've been seeing lots of unfriendly clouds lately
But I love when they uoload their cargo
I don't know if you are aware
that I love it when it rains and storms
love to see the water rushing down the hill
into the cleared corner drains
love the splattering sound of heavy rain drops.
yesterday we had a few passing storms, prior to the rain
it was a hot day, my garage was like an oven,
when it started raining hard
I opened my garage door so it may Kool my garage, it was a blessing
......I love rain, ever since I woke the next day after my heart attack, it was raining....
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

The clouds, stacked neatly
on the counter of sky.

A fascinating description!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

Great write Karla. Imaginative indeed.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 4, 2009

Great sense of humor Karla! love both poem and pic!...ET

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 4, 2009

so cute Karla,,,adorable and I can see it in my head..lol

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 4, 2009

Hi Karla, you always make me think of weather in a different perspective. You almost got me liking some of the weather I don't like!!! Great pen, my friend! Stay strong...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on June 4, 2009

Karla, this is so creative!Was fun reading.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 4, 2009

If anybody is making a mess, its you Karla...getting alot of rain up this way, sent from down that way...;-) ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 4, 2009

Clever write, clever you! Delightful poem, Karla; I love it! Well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 4, 2009

Only you can breathe life into the weather..well done.
hugs
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