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The Storm In My Head
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Found out last night I'm going on TWO storm chases next year. =]

' ... Not going to waste the rest of my life hiding every time it thunders. ... '

Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman


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Looking forward (no, i'm not)  (yes,
i a m) to Storm Season, 2010 --- two
opportunities to get out (die)  (will
you just shut.  Up?!?) i n the wind

and rain and confront my fear once
and for all.  If I could just tell these
two arguing in my head to s h u s h,
that is.  One wants to go (no i don't

no i don't)  (will you just be quiet
and let her tell her story?) and the
other one doesn't (see, i told you)
(i'm not going to tell you again ---).

Time I take the bull (tornado?)  (oh,
my word, will you stop with the
negative attitudes?!?) by the horns
and tell it it has no power over me.

Have let it run over me for far too
long.  (yeah, she's gonna go out
and meet the bear, shake its hand.)
(no, i'm not.)  (see?  having second

thoughts already, aren't you, aren't
you?)  Alright, that's enough.  I'm
going to do this, whether they're
ready to or not.  Not going to waste

the rest of my life hiding every time
it thunders.  (yeah, but ---)  I'll do all
I can to stay safe.  (yeah but -----
what if things go wrong??)  (what if

they don't?  think of all she'll have
to write about!  she's made up her
mind.  nothing you can say.  might
as well sit back and enjoy the ride.)

Couldn't have said it better myself.
Thank you.  (how come i always do
what she wants to do??)  (because
she's the boss.  THAT'S how come.)

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (12/9)


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 Reviews of "The Storm In My Head"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 16, 2010
Karla, I suppose you are always on your mind? -- clever piece of work here -- and a brave gal you are to face your fears -- I know you will win -- or will you win? -- peace and love to you my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by David Delaney
Reviewed on December 14, 2009
Great stuff Karla, we are moving into our cyclone season & as always I'm looking forward to it.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on December 13, 2009
I feel this way about sharks, Karla. I fear them, but they fascinate. You're braver than me, though. No way I intend to confront a shark!

P.S. Love your new pic. So cute! Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 11, 2009
woo hoo you go girl, ride the tiger.
fee

Reviewed by John Martin
Reviewed on December 10, 2009
Very creative...well done, Karla

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 10, 2009
Great write, Karla.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on December 10, 2009
Very clever, Karla...and great to see you conquering your fears!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
i enjoyed the conversation shared here-well written - these conversations can sure help us to work through things!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
lol. I can imagine your conflict, but you go chase those storms and get over your fear. I hope anyway. Great write. Liz

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
I love it, this is different for you and great Karla.

Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
Karla,
...paranoia may annoy ya but schizophrenia can come between ya...love the mono-dialogue throughout, the I will/I won't moments of self- challenge and fear, a great approach, and you're a very brave woman!

John

Reviewed on December 9, 2009
How cleverly done, Karla...I love the "Not Me"..."Oh, Yes YOU!" comedic attitude in this poem! But...jimminy...are you REALLY going on two Storm Chase this next year...like to Oklahoma and/or Kansas???
May the Powers be with you, my friend!
Blessings and Love - Micke
(yes, I'm finally able to return to some commenting)

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
So glad that you and you got that resolved, Karla.
I'd love to see you but please don't chase that storm
thisaway. -gene.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
The committee in our heads. God, what noise. Don't worry. Just walk through the fear. I'd love to go on a chase. Always wanted to in fact. Great writing.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
Hi Karla, A little confused are we sweetie? I do not think so. You captured this writing with total humor. Great Write!!

GOD BLESS
Tony

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
Excellent expose... enough said.

Triple cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
The discussion and the debate rages inside your head / You have conquered your fears / No matter what the wimp says, you have conquered your fears / Come on 2010 / Kicking storms asses and taking names . . .

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
I liked this Karla. Honest!
You only have two in your head?
You're lucky! Sometimes the noise
in my brain is like a sports event at
a stadium.
Blessings ...
r

Reviewed on December 9, 2009
Great write, Karla; love the duel arguments between Mind and StormFear! Cleverly penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
might as well sit back, and enjoy the ride

That sounds pretty good to me!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on December 9, 2009
Work-alcoholics have the itch, joggers have the itch, junkies have the itch, golfers have the itch...and so do Storm Chasers!!!

Georg



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