rollercoaster rider (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dwayne Pagnotto (Reader)

Reviewed on June 8, 2003

Dear Karla....this was a wonderfully descriptive piece, thank you for taking me along for the ride. I personally have motion sickness....so i can't get on these things....or there will be a big mess on everyone around me....lol. This is a great way to allow people like me to enjoy it from a distance tho.....thanks hunny.

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on June 7, 2003

hehehehehe! Oh, do I remember Cedar Point! Love the place! Now, as to rollercoasters....the one and only I have ever been on is the Corkscrew...a man has to know his limitations!
This poem has the feel of that ride...while I will not get on a rollercoaster again, I will be back to read this piece again. Good job!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Oh boy did I enjoy this wonderful, thrilling write!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 29, 2003

phew! what a ride...

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 29, 2003

ha! You described this so well, I could feel it as though I was on Viper again!

Reindeer

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 29, 2003

I rode a roller coaster one time and that was enough for me. Not interested in self torture anymore. thanks for sharing this nice roller coaster poem. It's as close as I'm going to get. HUgs Grady

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on May 29, 2003

A wonderful write and you can feel the ride...although honestly I hate rollercoasters..they scare the bejesus out of me LOL.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 29, 2003

I enjoyed the ride!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 29, 2003

Karla, indeed a very wild ride. Feel good to come down again. Bill Hugsssssss.....

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2003

Oh man... after riding that one with you I think I need a couple of tylenols and perhaps a tums too.. ;)

Excellent write.. LOL Sounds a bit like my life.. lol

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2003

I felt your roller coaster ride
I've been on many of them, but now a days too busy working, writing, and sketching.
much love karla.......Be careful you hear?

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on May 28, 2003

like the way you did this karla
kind of edgy
well done

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2003

Thanks for the ride :-)

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 28, 2003

ooo karla, I'm still dizzy! An excellent, fun piece. I loved it.
Love, your friend
Chrissie xx

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2003

I remember Cedar Point very well. Will be going there in September. I will think of you and Karen while I am there. Too old for roller coasters though. [smiles] Not really, but I have vertigo.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2003

Honey, you're making me miss my coasters...guess I'm going to have to go to the Point real soon.

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2003

to me life is a roller coaster ride as it is
This was a fun and cute write.
thanks for the trip

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on May 28, 2003

Hi Karla,
That was quite a ride...
Glad i'm back on the ground.
Whewww...lol

Great one

Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2003

I've had the experience here too. Was fun!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 28, 2003

(((karla))) for not having ridden this thing, you sure described it well! felt like i was right there ON the durn thing (and have NO intention of riding it, thankyouverymuch..she says, as SHE wants to ride the wicked twister! LOL)! heart-pounding action! very intense write! (when are YOU gonna' ride it, hmmmm? BIG GRINS! :D) love, your twink, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) :) *screaming as she reads this thriller of a write!* :0