sore feet blues (CAJUN style) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Sara Russell

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

I like dis! :) ......Sara

Reviewed by Nicole Lasher

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Heheheheh...I love it! If I got the rhythm right I'll be singing this whenever my dogs are barking too :)

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

Hi Karla,
Love it, love it love it..
BTW...did I say that I love it?...lol

Great write...

Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

This is great Karla, so clever.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

What a great song is this ...wow....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)

Reviewed on June 23, 2003

I agree with Tinka :-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

These sore feet do have "tha beat"....this could make a great song....."BILL WHERE ARE YOU!!! KARLa WROTE A NICE BLUUUUUUES SONGY!!!"

Hehehehehe......hope by the time yiy read this those feet of yours are feeling muchabetta!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

Cute.

Reviewed by Leslie Bond

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

Bravo, Bravo............This is a very, very good poem. You could sale this as a song too! Les

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

Karla, this is so nice. It seems as if humor is in the air today at the den! :)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

Giggle, but not that your feet get sore.
Soak them in some Cajun hot sauce? Just kidding.
Your friend.......Ron

Reviewed by Robert Montesino

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

Now I like this! Put a smile on my face! Thank you!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

Go soak those feet in some hot water and then put them up! Rest child, rest.
I thank you though for posting this,,if I didn't know so well how bad hurting feet feel, this would be hilarious! ~SH~

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

Sounds like a song to me.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

Love it Karla ,you do these so well, crack me up!LOL Thanks for the laugh, but I know sore feet are no laughing matter, so I'll shed a tear and a prayer for your feet;-)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

May I give you a foot rub, Karla?:) Excellent write!

tony

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

hehe. Cute poem. Made me smile.
Love
S.

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

{{{Hi my sweetest}}}
I know those poor pups are cryin'...How bout a trip to the day spa and get one of those relaxing, soooooothing "pedicures" for the birthday girl..(smiles)

Love ya,
Dove

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

((((Karla))))
Twinie Sis o yours Karen is correct this is a royal hoot, and being on my feet all night at the nursing home...geeeeeez do i know those aching doggie feet blues! GREAT GREAT GREAT...HUMOR AND WIT...oh yea Karla now lets break it on down and get with it! ;O) LOL
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

oh, karla, this is a hoot! a delightfully witty write about a not so witty problem that many people (including myself at times) put up with: sore, achy, barking feet! this was absolutely hiLARious; i really enjoyed this romp! thanks so much for sharing! (((HUGS))) and love, your twink, karen lynn. :( poor little footsies...OW! PAIN LINES! (karla's tootsies; she'd been on her feet since 6 AM this morning, worked 'til 3 without a break! no WONDER her feet were rebelling! :( )

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

hehehehe...hit it kiddo...I almost danced..
hehehehe...good on ya..gret ..just great!!!
Vesna

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

**laughing** You gonna hit the road with them blues, sweetie? {{{{{hugs}}}}}