it's gittin hot down herre (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amy Hodge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2003

Hee Heee

Reviewed by Marco Landi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

Great work Karla...
and about the clothes off...not a bad idea...

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

Gooooooooo Karla, yea ya got the beat! This is a humorous write that had me tappin toes and bouncing fanny in the seat! ;O) LOL
I too ask...when ya going to record...it would go gold!??? :O)
~Nikki~

Reviewed by a- maryllis

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

hahaha... great parody... when ya gonna record?? lol ;)

Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

cool..that would make
a good song...sounds like
it would have a great beat...
Mister

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

Oh Karla...you make me laugh! Funny write with a catchy beat.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

Awww Karla...c'on down to Croatia and take a dip in the cool Adriatic sea...the heat here is woderful..it heals the soul..wondrous...Hey! I really liked the beat....got me goin'...foot-tappin' etc.

{{HUGS}}
Vesna

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

LOL
This was a funny write, with a wonderful beat, I can relate to wanting it to cool down, thank God I don't have to deal with the humminity....
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

the beat of the heat is neat...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

Yup...

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

LOL...
Thanks for the laugh...
Oh how I hate the heat...
We are going to have temps
in the 90's with index
making it 105...

Try to keep cool...

Love & Hugs
Trixie :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

a good rap song Karla, but please, stay cool;-)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

Hahaha!....LOL! Love this a lot Karla! Keep cool!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

Hehe. Cool write though you complain about the heat!
Love
Nico

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

And that's a wrap!
Be cool!
Leland

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

Really enjoyed this Karla.Very well done!
Love
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

heheheheh....have you been listening to RAP.....lol you got it bad girl.....I think you need a check_UP!!....You might be gettin MaDa from tha heatttttta!!

love
TinkA!!

Reviewed by David Alexander, Sr. (Reader)

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

Karen I'm not much into rap. But I like the poem. You done good girl. Now go to this URL and Let me know what you think. God Bless
Poppa aka David

http://www.geocities.com/kyvietnamvet/Elbert_O_Alexander_My_Dad.html?1056836473312

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 29, 2003

kewl rap, karla; this is neat! love it; terrific job on this rappin' good poem! could hear the beat and also nelly singin' your lyrics; think you got a hit here.... ((((HUGS)))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :)