have you missed me (or, when computers get sick) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2003

Yeah, I was wondering what has happened. Haven't posted much lately, but usually you were the first people to comment my work. I was actually worried I wrote something you did not like hehe.
Good to hear that you are back. Hope that computer has recovered and stays stable.
Love
Nico

Reviewed by Donna Maris

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

YAYYYY!!!!! SHE'S BACK & MADDER THAN EVER!
LMFAO..U KNOW- everytime I see a Humvee
Im laughing at the "slinky" version you wrote..
Nice to see you - and don't mention baseball to me.
LOL.Like that season on Dallas? Next Spring we wake up
and find out it was all a freaking Dreammmm.
Yeahhh. Riiiiiiiiiight.
love, Donna

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

your sense of humor would surely be missed Karla, glad those computers are acting right now. hugs G

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

(((((Karla)))
Wonderful vent, excellent poem...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Just a wonderful poem and vent, dear Karla. You were sorely missed young lady, not only by AD but by Rufuz and I because we didnt get to hear your great words...welcome home! ED and Rufuz(w00f)

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

I am so sorry! Excellent poem, and it is going to be in an issue!
It was cute too! I was wondering WHERE you two WERE! I am GLAD you TWO are OK and not sick! Just email addicts, the curse!(grin)
I have the curse too! (I have had a hysterectomy so it is not THAT Curse!) (HaHa! Smile)
Love you two!
Becca

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Oh, Karla, shit, is this EVER hysterically funny!

I just love poets with an outrageous sense of humour!

Please send it to me for inclusion in the Winter, 2004 issue of Poetry in Emotion (Canada) ISSN 1705-4516, along with a brief 3 or 4 sentence bio.

Please other poets on AD do NOT send me unsolicited ms. or poems. I've not a feather's arse moment to review them.

Richard Vallance

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

YES I MISSED YOU!!! Good to have you back! another excellent write Karla!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

I'd choke more than their mouse, Karla, keeping you away from us like this.... I've missed you so much, now the den can be normal again that your back..... smiles to you.... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Frustrating isn't it? I honestly think they should start taking legal action against these creeps. I don't care what age they are. Destruction is destruction. You have been missed, So wonderful to see you back.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

(((Karla)))

So glad to be back here and reading your fine writes again here at the Den! You have come up with a winner here, and your frustration at not being able to write comes through loud and clear in this write! Well done; thanks for posting! Especially love those four last lines:

"I wish I could find who caused this mess
How would they like it, no 'Net access
How would they like no 'Net at THEIR house???
I'd rip out th eir server AND choke their mouse!!!!!!" LOL

Truly enjoyed this!

((((((((((((((((((((HUGS)))))))))))))))))))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Hi Karla:

I didn't know where you and Karen were. I wondered about that everyday. When I don't see my friends, I worried. Hope all is well with you and Karen.

I'm glad it was just the computer problems. Sent a e-mail to Karen sometime ago, but I guess it must be that she didn't get my mail.

Love you both,

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

I was wondering why I haven't seen your name lately. Nice to know a glitch is all it was and not something more serious. Good to have you back, buddy.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Hi Karla..thanks for coming straght to my page and replying...I am so sorry...did someone send you a virus? that is awful to be away for so long and wanting to get on...Actually sometimes I have trouble commenting...the site is so busy since the contests started....sometimes I try three or four times before the comment goes through....so its not all you...I hope you can get back on soon..take care sweetie...love...floria

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

it's great hearing from you. Michelle K. and I were just talking about you and Karen's absence last night.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

You are forgiven, Young Lady! Bad computer - Bad computer