how to get in trouble by not saluting (revised, repost) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

KArla,. I know what your saying here and I really loved it, I got such a laugh and such a memory. When I was in the navy at a quite young age, both physically and mentally, I saluted an Admiral going past our barracks that I was cleaning that day. He didnt return the salute so I gave him the finger, little did I know that his aide, a certain full commander was following him only a short few steps around the building, he caught me do so and i stood at attention for the rest of the day saluting. Sure as hell taught me how to salute!!Suffice it to say I was not at that base for very long, LOL! Thanks for a great memory and laugh friend Karla...best to sister, Peace, ED & Rufuz (w00f)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Glad to see you back!!

Great write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Funny as all out doors Karla. Not your sight but the way you wrote this, made me laugh a few times. hugs n love G

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Loved this Karla! Long, long ago I was an airman, too. I used to cross the street when I saw some of those guys coming (The real pompous ones) Great write!

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Very Humorous I enjoyed.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Humorous. Still makes me glad I never had to join the armed forces.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

(((((Karla)))
Excellent write...
God Bless
~Michelle~

I have mossed you so much... Now your back Yah!!!

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

have been there. can relate. They are sticklers about saluting in the Army too. I give this and them the Spaceballs salute with my highest compliments. Thank goodness we're out of the military, Kindra.
Salutes ... whoops we were both peons weren't we?
Grins,
Marie

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Excellent write! I absolutely LOVED IT!
Tell him where to go! (When you are Out of the Air force that is!)
Ha!(grin)
Glad you are back! Love ya!
Becca

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

LOL - the things we would like to say would get most of us killed! Great write!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Missed ya! Lights Out!
Thanks for serving the USA...

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

i had to read this standing at attention! ;)

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Welcome back karla...am so happy that ure back....excellent write!!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

HAHAHAHAHA Karla Welcome back, you have been missed! Damn those viruses! So good to read you again, this was really great, off to read your other one;-)Send the colonel to kentucky fried chicken where he belongs;-)!hehehe

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Ego, that's all he was, Ego... still would have told him off, but I was never in the force, either, and probably wouldn't be in long if I ever was.... ha... great write..... love it....stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

this is too cute, karla; enjoyed reading about your adventures upon entering the air force! god, you should write a BOOK about all the adventures you have experienced; it would be an INSTANT best seller, that is for DARN sure! truly enjoyed this gem of a write; thanks for sharing! LOL (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D LOL

and, btw, thank YOU for serving our country! God bless you!