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whistlin down the lights
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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There is a legend that says not to
whisle at the Northern Lights (Aurora
Borealis). I did...and look what hap-
pened! (FICTION)

HEY YOU
YEAH YOU
C'MERE

Never whisle at the Northern Lights
Or you'll be taken, clean outta sight

I SAID, HEY YOU
YEAH YOU
C'MERE

They'll come and take you, you'll disappear
Awwwwww that's legend, a fable, I hear

YOU
I'M TALKIN TO YOU
C'MERE

That's some story Northern People tell
How you'll come under a Spirit's spell

YOU
YEAH YOU YOU WANNA PIECE OF ME
C'MERE

Ooooh--they're turnin red, like they are mad
Them Northern Lights really think they bad

YOU
OOOOOH YOU THINK YOU BAD DONTCHA
I DARE YOU

OdangOcrud--they're comin after meeeeeeeeee
It's bye-bye time...now I'm history

WE GOT HER
WE GOT HER
HEE HEE HEE HEE HEEEEEEEEEEEE

(C) karla dorman, 2003


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 Reviews of "whistlin down the lights"
Reviewed by Donna Maris
Reviewed on November 2, 2003
LMAO..Karla you are one twisted twin..
=) remember I said it first!
it doesn't take much to entertain me btw ..
ha ha ha ha Donna

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2003
Nice bit of spookiness in this write, Karla!

Reviewed on November 1, 2003
This was an excellent piece...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on November 1, 2003
Uhhhhhhhhhh Karla, that is scary.
After having read this story, I promise I won't try it out.
Nico

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 1, 2003
Funny write Karla1!!

Reviewed on November 1, 2003
Enjoyed this cute read, Karla; thanks for sharing (and glad those northern lights didn't get ya' for whistling at 'em! LOL)! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on November 1, 2003
Cute write, Karla. Thanks.
Jill
P.S. Hope you had a nice holiday!

Reviewed on November 1, 2003
Cute wonderful write. I hear you whistled well and are still around to tell LOL

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 1, 2003
excellent poetized humor...

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Oh,Karla, how awesome this is!
Way to go girl! How cute this
was too!

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003


Oh, this is just TOO cool!

Very very amusing, and yet also very true!

While on many a canoe trip up North in the wilds of Canada, my buddies and I saw lots and lots of SCARY Northern Lights!

Great poem for Hallowe'en!


Richard Vallance


Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Cool write, Karla. Whistlin' down the lights is better than whistlin' in the dark.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Karla, this is so cool.... don't be history, though... tomorrow is another day.... eeeeeeee ooooooooo..... hugs and love comin at ya...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Very entertaining
Happy Halloween.......

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
I like the legend Excellent
Happy Halloween!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Very good original write Karla! Creative thinking;-)!Hope you enjoyed your costume and had fun!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Hey you, c'mere, my momma done told me that girls don't whistle, maybe this is why...bet you learned your lesson? An enjoyable write, but if I don't hear from you anytime too soon I will assume you are up with the family Aurora...Peace, Ed & Rufuz (w00f)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
You can't say I didn't warn you! Darn now I am going to have to hit the books to find out how to bring you back! Do you have any idea how far it is for me to walk to Alberta to get those books? Lost my license the last time I went after the lights...hmmm oh that was the police car. Fun write Karla

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Enjoy your humor, girl!!

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
told you not to whistle!!!!!!!!

clever write

john+

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2003
Hahahahaah...funny......HEY YOU BRING KARLA BACK......funny......floria


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