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The Hot Head
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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Still feeling lousy...but trying to laugh the 'flu away (GO AWAY, DAMN 'FLU!).

FEVER all consuming fire
COOLING RELIEF
i desire

my head is
HOTTER THAN A FLAME
I'M SEEING THINGS--GOING INSANE (not really)

FEVER FEVER
eyes burning bright
i'm
HOT COLD
shiver in the night

FEED A COLD or STARVE A FEVER
CAN'T RECALL--WHAT *IS* THE RELIEVER

FEVER FEVER PLEASE go away
and
DON'T COME BACK another day...

'cause right now i am a HOT HEAD
LEAVE ME 'LONE--GOIN' BACK TO BED

(C) Karla Dorman, 2003.  :(


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 Reviews of "The Hot Head"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 15, 2003
Auchhhhhh!! Feell better soon okay!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2003
Karla I am praying for you ...take care of yourself...floria

Reviewed on December 14, 2003
Sorry you are feeling so lousy get feeling better ..God Bless ~Michelle~

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
Have someone pickup some Asafoetida from an herbal store: one dropperful in a few ounces of grapefruit juice, take as often as every two hours. It is stout stuff but will kill any virus around PDQ! Great write, Karla. ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
Very colorful in your miseries, dear Karla. Feel better soon!

{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
the flu sure makes us feel blue ... feel better ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
You gave your Twink the flu? Shame on you! Now rest up and get better.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
OH it is sad when one feels so bad...
Take care.

Peg

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
Colorful anyway. Hope that you are better, soon. Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
I think I have the way to pay the boss back for giving you his virus. Once his bug stops biting, give it back to him again, with a big kiss, preferably in front of a camera so that you can send it to his wife, boy won't that get him in trouble fast! Peace and love, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
I like the colors! I hope you
get better soon! Will be praying for
you! Thanks for my reviews!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
I'll keep praying for your return to good health. Fun write! Love the colour choices.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 14, 2003
I can see by all the colors that you're out of sorts;-)hahaha
Hope you'll be well soon! Don't forget vitaman C liquids and rest!
Great rant and style;-)!

Reviewed on December 14, 2003
(((Folks)))

she IS a hothead, and she SHARED her flu with me! now I am a hothead, too! (and i have a good reason to be; right now i am MAD at her! LOL)

(((and Karla)))

a rather colorful write about a not so fun event; hope you feel better soon! (thanks for sharing your DANGED flu with me! i REALLY appreciate your thoughtfulness...NOT!! but it's REALLY our boss's fault; HE is the one to blame! LOL); enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your (sick) twin, karen lynn. :) *cough, cough*


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