If you love fireworks, you have to try it from a boat on the ocean in my hometown, they shoot them out over the ocean from the beach, it is so cool to sit out on your boat, smoking a doobie and watching them from there...although Rufuz doesn't like the noise and seems scared of them...Quite enjoyed this...wish it were july now...Peace from Soggy NJ, Ed & rufuz
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2004
One of your best karla
Have a Great, Prosperous, New Year!
Hugs
Your friend.........Ron
I like the revision!
The fireworks are great each
year! Just like in our backyard!
(by the lake) We go to Granny's house
every year and swim in the pool and watch fireworks!
Fun! Excellent poem!
Thanks for reviews!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2004
I could feel and see the fireworks with this write. Not sure if the US does this, but in Canada, in many of our cities we have "First Nights" on New Years Eve that always ends in fireworks. Its a wonder to see the lights shining against the white snow.......that is if winter hasn't been kipnapped! :-)
I loved this the first time you posted it, and I love it even more now! Wow, what a stirring, soul-shaking poem; could feel the excitement of the fireworks bursting in all their technicolor glory above us! Could hear the sound of the thunder too; wow, but do I love that sound, as daddy would say! Terrific write, Karla; hope this wins! It should; it's GREAT! BRAVA for one fine write, Karla; you keep on gettin' better and better!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
For the past two years (2006-2008) The Bridge of Silver Wings has earned a name for itself both as a series of poems published in different e-zines and as a book first published in 2007.
What makes this 2009 edition a special one is th
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Have a Great, Prosperous, New Year!
Hugs
Your friend.........Ron
Reindeer
Fireworks was banned in Plett this year!!
Love Tinka
The fireworks are great each
year! Just like in our backyard!
(by the lake) We go to Granny's house
every year and swim in the pool and watch fireworks!
Fun! Excellent poem!
Thanks for reviews!
I loved this the first time you posted it, and I love it even more now! Wow, what a stirring, soul-shaking poem; could feel the excitement of the fireworks bursting in all their technicolor glory above us! Could hear the sound of the thunder too; wow, but do I love that sound, as daddy would say! Terrific write, Karla; hope this wins! It should; it's GREAT! BRAVA for one fine write, Karla; you keep on gettin' better and better!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D