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now that's cold :)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
  
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While we in Texas are enjoying springtime temperatures, the northeast part of the country is in the grips of an arctic air mass. Why do you think I live in Texas now?? :-) I've been where you are (all except the "balls" part LOL).

refridgerated
lungs
twin
crystallized glaciers
inhale
arctic
chill
exhale ice

numbed
brittle
digits
flash frozen from wind
stiff
gnarled
with
frigid pain

balls
tucked
high
seeking warm shelter
damn
this
cold
HURRY SPRING

it
hurts
to
move let me ask you
how
does
the
eskimo survive

(C) Copywritten, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "now that's cold :)"
Reviewed on January 17, 2004
Brrr, excellent lil poem ...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed on January 16, 2004
Ah! Karla, i too moved south years ago fleeing the blasts of winter. my friend you describe it more than adequately. BRRRRRRR is right.
You make me take out gloves to type. <smiling>
{{{{{Karla))) is a goodun. Love and warmth.
Mikii

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2004
40 lbs. of very warm clothes, is how the eskimo survives, you silly thing! hehe... c'mon up north and join us in an igloo! (Hot toddy's don't hurt either! Ha!) I do believe the northeasterners among us will see that you've captured their winter TO A T, Karla, me sweet. Good'n.. katy xox.

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on January 15, 2004
Been feeling like that in the UK of late. It even snowed yesterday and today !!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 15, 2004
Karla
this is absolutely a kool write
I am from the northeast.
I know cold
hurts just thinking about it
Plus I hate it

William ... Love and Peace

William

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 15, 2004
Brrrrrrrrrr of a poem Karla!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
Another great poem from the great Karla. :0)

Evelyn.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
Want me to pack up some snowballs and send them to you Karla...LOL...we have plenty.....although it is raining today...I heard that texas gets really hot..dont know if I could take that either...great writing and expression in this one..you are on a roll...blessings to you..floria

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
Thanks a lot, Karla. I would have to read this right before I have to walk my two dogs - or should I say, they have to walk me! BRRRR!

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
actually, once you get to it the cold is easy to deal with,
wool, wool felt and duffle
moose hide, and beaver fur
all help.

I'm almost enjoying the the weather . . .

Karla, this is a stong write,
realy well done

john+

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
I love this Karla ;) Excellent!
Love
~Chrissie xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
Karla, this is great! Love your sense of humour,I would say it's hot enough to melt the igloo;-)I know a few having (highballs;-)
today!heehee

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
Good write..I've been hearing about the weather there...and I'm thankful for my sunshine...
Good to read you again, my friend..
Hugs
Jenni

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
The fun part of being cold is warming up!!! All that hot cocoa, etc:) Guess I am used to cold in New York:) This was great, lots of fun:)

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
Now this reminds me of the time in SEINFELD when Geeorge jumped into some really cold water ... :))

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
How do eskimo's survive? Those igloo's are heated with more then fire :-)

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
great description, Karla

Reviewed on January 14, 2004
Bitingly cold write! LOL Made me feel the chill in more ways than one! BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!

Wonderfully humorous write; enjoyed! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on January 14, 2004
This was excellent Karla, Loved it!

Reindeer


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