cow chips (haiku) (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

a write with depth....

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

I like this... it's over my head, but no surprise there, since I'm only 5' tall... Sigh... I can still like it, right? (who invited her?) katy xox.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

Speaking of "layers"...there are many in you, Ace,
that's for certain.
What a mind!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

divinity in cow chips...only you could write this and make it sound good

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

Deep man.

Felix

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

Hey Ace welcome to the land of brevity. Cool

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

I always knew there was 'just something important' about cow chips. A most interesting 'Ku.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

Two way street this one...Lol!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

Very well done!

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

cow chips -- what a title! but then
what a 'ku!

good write
as Touchstone said ---it is full of matter.......

john +

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

Sometimes we have to sort through a lot of BS to get to the truth of the matter, but not all things are as they appear. Sometimes the reality of the matter is that, what we believed was truth is just a bunch of crap and what we had been convenced was all a bunch of BS turns out to be truth. It is very hard to sift through it all and still rise up to a high enough level to not have our findings be tainted by others. Truth requires a lot of introspection and no external input. Interesting write, Robert. This one swirls in so many directions that I am ducking to make sure none of it hits me. LOL.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

There you go with that annoying "truth" thing again, Sir Ace...
"cow chips" = "meadow wafers"???
A playful, well crafted haiku. Much enjoyed.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

I told you so! lol.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

Meaning is as diverse as the substance that the truth shape-shifts and from which it is derived. A hundred word-essay on seventeen syllables! And what are cow chips?! Not the same as pork chops, I take it!! :)) Guess I can figure from Judy's comment below: and I can definintely say that THAT speaks! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

Again the meaning escapes me, but it is nonetheless a perfect, 5-7-5,
Peace, eD & rUfUz

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

Steak n chips, fish n chips. To bloody right the ACE, the meaning is a tad diverse...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

This one went right over my head. I must be tip toeing through the tulips again.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

Okay and one thing about them if you let them dry and they get real dry they can always be burned later. The Indians used them a lot well after they dried but I guess some were buffalo chips.

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

A wonderful haiku with nature at it's center:>)

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

creative lol :) This could be taken many ways.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 26, 2005

Dare I leave a "Mad Cow" comment, dis ease is everywhere;-)

eileen