Wow, Jude - this is an RBI if I ever saw one! Way to crack your pen!

Love, Rhonda

Justly poetic flight of fancy brought down in the reality end.

Ron

CRAP I would say...Cognitive Rendition About Poetry. Sorry, I couldn't help myself ;)...unique work as ever Jude that I enjoyed much. Panda :)

I love your wordplay and musical use of the words. This is a thought provoking piece.

Brett

You certainly do have a orginal way of putting things :-) Enjoyed.

absolutely unique...

WoW
oK

it's like a saying goes
"it's to right, to be right"
ironic
New always get new from you.....

Jude, LOL I needed this! Very well done! Thank you for the smiles and the laugfter.

Hugs
Tina

relieving her constipation....

heh..you jude you.

enjoyed.

spasiba,

~D.

Caught me off guard on this one...loved it, can just envisiont he jester in the bushes...great write..made me laugh after a long hard day at work.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Most Get Better Than But, This Z Best Than Yet...

TRASK

Now this is what I call you bein C-U-T-E... Comin Up To Expectations of exactin justice and purpose in words that please, tease and intrigue. A poem of montage, of perhaps three different overlays. I am not a great fan of night-flights; I find them dissipating and disorientating and am sooooo grateful to fly into the dawn... which is the way my thoughts link phases one and two here. And the third brings a measure of paradoxical surreal down-to-earthness to the aspiration of the pursuit of dreams. For some reason I keep readin "The basis of poetic justice" as "The balance of poetic justice", which is perhaps what the poem is all about, when it comes down to it. Maybe it makes heavy use of Romantic Irony, establishing poles of contradiction through which to explore the nature of truth... and maybe I'm just caught bare..faced in the undergrowth, expressing BS!! :)) Torrid and florid, Jude... and certainly captures the imagination! LOL K xx

Very wise and as always masterful

Now that's what I call a real shit job, hope he don't smoke..

Wise, and worthy of several reads.

Carmen

So, everything I write is valid? :) Cool!
Your a poetic genius on this one!
A Keeper, for sure!
Smiles!
Kimmy

Jude you wield a mighty pen! This is priceless! Glad I don't get constipated;-)

This is a new branch of your musings and I must say I like the final twist. Good oen Jude.

Fee

A court jester
Is hiding in the bushes
Relieving her constipation

I've always liked the jesters the best.

Wonderful

Deception in the den, the wolves teach their cubs how to identify ass-kissed scat. Don't you go anywhere RJ...stay around and watch the courtesan laugh the court jester right on outta the bush and splat on the cave petroglyphs blackened by the soot of tallow...


Ms. Sage Sweetwater

Very well written my friend! Holly

Sad really, for man can err too much and hide behind excuses. Great psychological insight. Victor

This is priceless, Jude!! There is much to consider here, and yet it all comes down to the last few lines. <grin> I love it!

Peace. Joyce

Well penned poetry, holding a multitude of thought

Robert I enjoyed this heartfelt and intimate read.
I found it intriguing, thank you for its offering and the uniqueness in qualities it presented and rendered.

Wonderful conclusive twist and yet befitting!
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

hahahahahaha...oh you sooooooooo damn bright...this is just topnodge!!

Love Tinka

At first I laughed at the last line. Read it again and could see the profundity. Very nicely done.
Rusty