A most beautiful depiction of how for every brave heart's cause there is a just and fair reward. And that for every lonely fortress there is one who holds the key to the drawbridge! The word "legitimacy" speaks of a divine mission or right. I guess that for each Knight, there is but one Holy Grail from which to sip, and vice versa. A tender allegory of love's release and capture. Chivalrous and gallant in all respects. Kate xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
Very moving indeed....
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
To know one has helped another is always a great joy :-) wonderful write of this experince.
The Man of few words, Has depth of soul that pervades into the realms where dreams live, and reality has taken wing...I love being whisked away there...
:)Ch'erie
Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Beautifully written and gives sway to much thought.
Reviewed by Dennis Keister (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
How nice it is when we meet someone who's doors we want to and are able to unlock. This poem captured that journey very nicely.
The finest poetry flows from your soul...and nothing is more precious to us than that. Crusader - I understand - how one has had nearly everything taken away - and will fight to keep the one beautiful thing - the legitimacy of poetry by noting the shadows on the wall. The richness of this piece is in stark contrast to those two living it...rubbing shoulders here with intense emotions, Jude...we spend our whole life looking for an encounter like this, it's to be cherished and held on to like an heirloom so very precious,
"I was rewarded by being allowed to see The light reflecting from your eyes"
A soul buried in the earth will never see the sun...
hopelessly behind on reading, not to mention writing, but wanted to take a quick moment to say how particularly beautiful your last two poems have been. real emotional resonancy and the usual superb imagery. hope all is well, Dawn
Jack London’s cousin writes a heartwarming, young adult story about the glory of life. It is also a heart-pounding adventure to a new and strange world.
a superb write, jude.
peace,
carolyn
Ron
Regis
The light reflecting from your eyes
And to experience legitimacy
Crying tears of relief upon our shoulders"
...And what a reward it is to connect in this way, when two hearts and minds become one. Another beautiful piece of writing!
~Butch Howard
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
:)Ch'erie
Be safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Wow what a terrific ending
Doesn't happened often to experience legitimacy!
And wow your words and tone
Intense tenderness felt through the page!!
Love Peace and Happiness to you....Yolie
Well written mate!!
Love Tinka
many do not know that relief, sadly.
Powerfully beautiful, Jude!
Hugs Angela
Richard
The light reflecting from your eyes
And that is a wondrous thing.
Fee
Good use of words with depth to them. This is an honest write that I enjoyed.
George
Our Intentions are acceptable if they justify our quest. Love your word usage my friend. Always, Paul.
Amor
"I was rewarded by being allowed to see The light reflecting from your eyes"
A soul buried in the earth will never see the sun...
Sage
I really enjoyed this especially the ending.
God Bless-God Speed,
~Spirit Warrior
Love,
Susan