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Crusader
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At the time,
My intent was noble but misconstrue d

Like a crusader whose quest
Was launched with a sincere gesture
But was diffused
By the consequences of unwarranted actions

I stood before the doorway
Opened to your reasoning
Attempting to address the substance of your convictions

Seeking permission to enter the room
Where concealed emotions
Fueled the furnace of your dreams

Cautiously I began to whisper
Through transparent walls
The intent of my concern

I did so with the deepest discretion

In time, you rescinded your pretenses
And acknowledged the vainness of being too edgy and over-sensitive

Surfacing from the depths of loneliness
Inhaling the breath of a new dawn

I was rewarded by being allowed to see
The light reflecting from your eyes

And to experience legitimacy
Crying tears of relief upon our shoulders

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 Reviews of "Crusader"
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 30, 2007
An exceptional write Jude! Such depth of emotion are in this poem!........M

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on June 26, 2007
ah yes, that priceless new dawn...
a superb write, jude.
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
A most beautiful depiction of how for every brave heart's cause there is a just and fair reward. And that for every lonely fortress there is one who holds the key to the drawbridge! The word "legitimacy" speaks of a divine mission or right. I guess that for each Knight, there is but one Holy Grail from which to sip, and vice versa. A tender allegory of love's release and capture. Chivalrous and gallant in all respects. Kate xx

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2007
Very moving indeed....

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
To know one has helped another is always a great joy :-) wonderful write of this experince.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 23, 2007
Getting into another's personal space, personified.

Ron

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on June 22, 2007
This is beautiful.

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on June 22, 2007
Jude, this is touching and heart rendering...as two hearts try to come together. I enjoyed this a lot!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 22, 2007
Respectful persistance resulted in a fine reward; I love the concept, Jude. This is a touching write. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2007
"I was rewarded by being allowed to see
The light reflecting from your eyes

And to experience legitimacy
Crying tears of relief upon our shoulders"

...And what a reward it is to connect in this way, when two hearts and minds become one. Another beautiful piece of writing!
~Butch Howard

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2007
And so it is with intimate relationships ... requires effort of two hearts seeking mutual understanding. Well done Ace.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*


Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 22, 2007
wonderful and very human write-

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Beautiful writing,enjoyed...Hugsssss

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
The Man of few words, Has depth of soul that pervades into the realms where dreams live, and reality has taken wing...I love being whisked away there...

:)Ch'erie

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Beautifully written and gives sway to much thought.

Reviewed by Dennis Keister (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
How nice it is when we meet someone who's doors we want to and are able to unlock. This poem captured that journey very nicely.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
An enjoyable read depicting the thoughts of a Crusader! Mixed emotions in the face of rality..........

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed on June 21, 2007
WOW Jude, you leave me breathless with the intensity of emotion in verse; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
This is a powerful masterpiece my friend

Wow what a terrific ending

Doesn't happened often to experience legitimacy!

And wow your words and tone

Intense tenderness felt through the page!!

Love Peace and Happiness to you....Yolie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
This is such a heartfelt offering!!

Well written mate!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
..."And to experience legitimacy"
many do not know that relief, sadly.
Powerfully beautiful, Jude!

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Very nicely written and heart felt.
Hugs Angela

Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Truly beautiful and heart felt Jude.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
A touching wide open heart write Jude. Beautifully penned!
Richard

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
I was rewarded by being allowed to see
The light reflecting from your eyes

And that is a wondrous thing.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Love breaks down the barriers.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Very beutiful piece and surprizingly one that fitted my own mood today so I thank you for sharing this special piece with an agaonized soul.

Fee

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Jude,
Good use of words with depth to them. This is an honest write that I enjoyed.

George

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Jude,

Our Intentions are acceptable if they justify our quest. Love your word usage my friend. Always, Paul.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
well done

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Such a powerful masterpiece, dear friend. You never fail to inspire with your poetic grace.
Amor

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Profound write with expression that deeply shake the foundations of the soul. Thanks for your never-diminishing vigor and intellect.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
This is such a beautiful poem. The line "Inhaling the breath of a new dawn" means so much. enjoyed

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
If your poetry soars any higher I'll be uaable to read it...I'd love to visit the realm where your thoughts are born...;-)

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
The finest poetry flows from your soul...and nothing is more precious to us than that. Crusader - I understand - how one has had nearly everything taken away - and will fight to keep the one beautiful thing - the legitimacy of poetry by noting the shadows on the wall. The richness of this piece is in stark contrast to those two living it...rubbing shoulders here with intense emotions, Jude...we spend our whole life looking for an encounter like this, it's to be cherished and held on to like an heirloom so very precious,

"I was rewarded by being allowed to see The light reflecting from your eyes"

A soul buried in the earth will never see the sun...


Sage

Reviewed by Spirit Warrior
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
Very beautiful Jude.
I really enjoyed this especially the ending.

God Bless-God Speed,

~Spirit Warrior

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
wow...this packs a punch! As always, the imagery is stirring, Jude. Thank you.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
very touching, special write. your talent knows very little limits. cheers

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
hopelessly behind on reading, not to mention writing, but wanted to take a quick moment to say how particularly beautiful your last two poems have been. real emotional resonancy and the usual superb imagery. hope all is well, Dawn


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