So on seeing the new title I had to return and read this again. Us Brits are onsessed with wordplay of course so I never understood all the fuss. A great little poems containg a big truth.
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Reviewed on February 1, 2002
woah woah, this is a good poem, is this what was all the din about porn of? Jeeze. Well, in my personal opion i think it is a good poem, and we get a lot worse then that in S.E at school. well, ok so they dont tell you all the nitty gritty bits, but you find them out yourself dont you? A bit lie crystal singing. Dont let som peoples comments get u down, look at the glass as half full, of whatever it is. :) peace and love, keep writing, please.
THIS is the poem these Christian yahoos were calling porn? Good god. My biggest fear about Authors' Den is that more people like you will NOT join. You know the type: writers?
I am reading the thread that this refers to. Consorship? NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am with ya kiddo as are a lot of people. I am a christian, have read the bible from cover to cover, I am NO SAINT and they aren't either, including other faiths or no faith at all. PLEASE, don't let this get you down. You write much better than most of these so called authors here, including me. I am learning a lot on the craft of writing from you. Keep it, say what you like, I will. Much love, Janet xoxoxoxo
Reviewed by Michael Bauer (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2002
I wish I could have given it an eleven. Writing from our feelings always makes the intensity double. Also, it makes want to say I'm sorry for being a man. Great work.
Reviewed by Lisa Cannons (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2002
Have to agree with Sandi on this one...life can be raw,and what better way than raw honesty, I loved this poem April..as I do all your work <grin> Keep writing girl! :-)
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Reviewed by Deanna Jones (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2002
Enjoyed this, even if it was a bit too much for someone. ;-)
Reviewed by Claywoman (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2002
If this is pornography according to Ms. Dunn, then what does she think of when she reads the bible?
Not your best work...but I had to counter-balance the gratuitous low score...
Let's talk about style, structure, vision, voice and execution before we discuss
limitations of theme...otherwise, anyone whose work reflect a different
geo-political, social, ethnic, religious or cultural bias most be consigned
to the scrap heap. (Omigod, Michelangelo painted nudes! we'll just have to repaint the chapel!)
What the previous reader missed is that life can be raw and can be nasty! I for one appreciate the honesty in this piece.. Don't be discouraged you have obviously inspired a reaction that wasn't her thing but thats ok read Allen Ginsberg sometime. His work will let you know that all is not pretty in poetry ... Keep writing!!!
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Let's talk about style, structure, vision, voice and execution before we discuss
limitations of theme...otherwise, anyone whose work reflect a different
geo-political, social, ethnic, religious or cultural bias most be consigned
to the scrap heap. (Omigod, Michelangelo painted nudes! we'll just have to repaint the chapel!)
Really now, how creative is blantant RAW
talk? Sorry I could only Rate 1 - 0 is missing!
Karen Dunn