Some people insist on sharing their ignorance. A great write and I hope it will shine a light into some lonely poets. Thank you for sharing. Love and Warmth to you.
love this verse Cynthia but I'm honest with my feelings, I'm good and bad, I write good and bad, but I do not like bigots, racially, poetically or otherwise :-)
Acidic and razor sharp wit my friend.......I smile as I read this with you. I have had a few "critics" over the years.......It's the endearing friends like you I have made along the way from my poetry that keeps me writing.....I send you much peace and love dear Cynthia....
Cynthia,
I'm glad you wrote the preface-----you are a great writer. Do not be disturbed by "one person's opinion". There are thousands of us who LOVE reading what you write!
God Bless you today
Kathy Perry
A touching write that makes one stop and examine their own self and attitude...I like what my grandmother always said..."If you can't say something positive, then don't say anything at all." It's hard sometimes but as I've aged, I've learned much about feelings through my own hurt and observing others...I think your poetry is wonderful. Each poet writes from their heart, their own unique feelings, dreams, and desires....how can another poet not encourage this...enjoyed well done my friend!
Blessings,
JOyce B.
I confess that I have been cranky, but I can never be for long. I like the way you took a difficult topic and by your gentle words made me willig to listen till the end. Enjoyed your creative wordplay with "acid tone" and the last line about the sour grapes.
I don't think I'm ever cranky and I look forward to reading your lines along with so many others. You make many good points here Cynthia. Thank you for sharing.
If only people would be as humble and grateful for the things that they have.I've come across people in my life including some family members who would get cranky about the most littliest things that I shouldn't even be an issue.They make the littliest things into the biggest of deals.I don't let their negativity or their crankness wear off on me because I know better and plus that is not the type of person that I am or want to be.In your 4th stanza,people should really take what you express into consideration and use it in their daily lives.People may not be rich in terms of having money,but they are rich in terms of being alive and living.That is the most important thing.I enjoy reading this poem.take care of yourself
The Wholly Book of Doo-Doo-Rot-on-Me is adult satirical humor featuring adult language and adult content, and the work is a parody of the Old Testament Book of Deuteronomy.
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Can't imagine you being cranky . . . your quilled pen is forever sharp!!
Hugs,
Lance
Ed
Cryssa
As you know I am going through something similar, but we must press past it, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Bill :-)
I'm glad you wrote the preface-----you are a great writer. Do not be disturbed by "one person's opinion". There are thousands of us who LOVE reading what you write!
God Bless you today
Kathy Perry
Blessings,
JOyce B.
Great write Cynthia, In Christ Jesus, zach
Newfie hugs, Rose
You made some good points here.
Connie
Harold M. Nash
Edwin
Regis