Needing to Go (poem) by larry r linville on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 18, 2009

HAHA, this puts me in mind of a Comedy we have here called "Kath & Kim. Last week Kath and her Hubby had a job doing a commercial spot on the TV for...You guessed it, Incontinence Pads LOL..They axed the add after the first showing, as the bike shorts they were wearing were...well I think you can well imagine :)
Hang in there, us women who have had babies know the deal LOL
Cheers Ch'erie

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

I enjoy reading this poem,well done and very amusing,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

Honest and real; gotta love your attitude and outlook, Larry. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

You got it right, Larry. It's a good thing I've got nowhere
to go--except to the john. -gene.

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

Enjoyed the read!
Sorry I can't write more....gotta go pee!

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

BOY! Or BOY can I RELATE!
Being a School Bus Driver, from 6:30 to 9:00A. and NO STops, unless "I" can find a place for my Big 40ft. Bus.
then again throughout the day, I have #9 routes, so I smiled, reading this for awhile!
Your Soul shines Larry! I find your writing HONEST, STRAIGHTFORWARD and why not, why hide behide a mask! I don't believe in it either...
God Has Blessed you Uniquely and NOW! YOU get to reach out and BLESS Others with your giving warm Heart and SOUL!
Thank you!
HOpe you stop by my corner and take a peek - and maybe even stay awhile... He called on me recently! I think he can speak to YOU through my writing, I am his VESSEL!
Believe me I look forward to it! I'm on a Natural Loving Godly High!
I feel poem comin' on!
WRITE ON!

Warmest of Blessings of Love and Bright Light, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo

STay Positive! Through the warmth of your inner serenity....P.S. Hope you can get a grip on this leak that seems to have a voice to speak... Smiling! WE need to create something while on the road! :) YOu know what, it's worse when number #2 calls upon YOU! lol

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

The more I age, the more this comes true - well done, Larry, now I gotta go. Excuse me -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

Try flomax really works in about a week.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

Cute and yes I remember them , it seemed to be every two seconds and yes now it is me Larry. Happy belated birthday, how does it feel to be another year younger.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

Oh Larry! Oh Larry, I am blessed with a bladder holding a gallon or so without sending messages to stop, but when I do stop I hear laughs and questions like, "you got a leak?" and more laughs, until long time after I finish and ask for another Coors.

Georg

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

Hey its when you can't that becomes a bigger problem...great write...love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

This one is cute, Larry; well done! Believe me, I know the feeling; when you gotta go, you gotta GO!! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

The Tables Have Indeed Sadly Turned for me, as well. But I'm real glad I ain't too shy to pee outside with me dogs, when I have to. I think they might even admire me for that; but my wife, however, is another story!