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55
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
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beautifully delicate
tall red tulips
sway their hips with the wind
pursing their lips to the passing
deer, heads lowered in consideration
of a mouthful of petals

yellow and black birds
croak songs at dawn
in jubilation of freshly
stocked seed trays
and thick beak peckers
adorn the tree branches
utilizing caution to
prowling stray cats

perhaps they are affected by this
luminous full moon
and numerical patterns upon
calendars or alignments of celestial groupings

nest builders gather twigs, others repair
from destructive intense winds
some just passing through, riding the
patterns in instinctual knowing where to be
and when

patterns upon patterns are fulfilled
not one thought in the effort
spontaneously arising, just being
life is lived, life is happening
awake and beautiful


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 Reviews of "55"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 17, 2012
well said

m

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2012
Finger on the pulse of nature, words that tell she is alive! You have painted motion, scent, sound and freshness in these lines. ~~ Diana

Reviewed on May 9, 2012
How lovely that one can see their progression of life in this manner. How we age with such beauty and knowledge with what we gather along the way. You are a beautiful soul Debby

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on May 7, 2012
not sure which is more beautiful, your poem or or zenish garden; just the right amount of shade. I would love to meditate there...
peace and fulfillment to you, michael

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 6, 2012
patterns upon patterns are fulfilled
not one thought in the effort
spontaneously arising, just being
life is lived, life is happening
awake and beautiful

this stanza is a lovely summation to a poem that has thrilled my heart and mind with an amazing sense of satisfaction as I partook of its images and ideas, Debby. I was 55 on the 4th and I immediately made a bee-line for this poem which seemed appropriate - and I'm glad I did! A beautiful work to "claim" as a birthday write! :)) xx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 6, 2012
Springtime at its best, full of flowering and birdsong, spread by the seeds of poetry.

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 6, 2012
wonderful spring poem ...

"sway their hips with the wind
pursing their lips to the passing"

lovely liines

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 6, 2012
wonderful-yes-no thought just living, growing etc--

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 6, 2012
Well written and presented...spring is wonderful.
fee

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on May 5, 2012
Mesmerising and lovely reflection of Mother Nature at her best!
"life is lived, life is happening awake and beautiful"
Hugs, Diana...

Reviewed on May 5, 2012
Yes, a tip toe through the tulips and mother natures perfect being.
Bless you!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 5, 2012
Taking on nature and taking it on very well, Debby. A composite of a hodgepodge of the tulips and the creatures who inhabit the space of earth nearby.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on May 5, 2012
Excellent and truly beautiful images in this piece, Debby


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