Halo's Divination (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Robby Baby Poet of Amour (Reader)

Reviewed on September 8, 2008

A very lovely poem on unity. Interesting to see halos as a theme for unity. One wouldn't normally associate the two. I like to do that in my poetry, assocciate two things that aren't normally associated together, because I know I can do it succesfully, and when it is done successfully, as you can do as well, it makes the point you are trying to convey more poignant. I'm glad to have that skill, as I think it is rare. Someone was just commenting on how I can do that, and that I should investigate that further.

I'm trying harder in comments to leave more meaningful comments, in regards to the esthetics of the poem, for any reviews I do for people. I hope I am succeding! lol

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 2, 2008

This is lovely Vickie

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 30, 2008

YOU got that RIGHT Vic!
The UNITY of each other will bring US Closer TOGETHER!
Love your heart Sister! WE are all ONE in the END!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings of LoVE, Light and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheexooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 29, 2008

This poem is divine Vicky,people are different and that is what makes us special and unique.You know,everybody is like a piece of fruit.We have different skins,but on the inside everyone is simply delicious with the sweetness of our inner soul that allow the juices to flow inside of your hearts and minds.You have written a fine poem.take care Vicky.I'm looking forward to reading your next poem

Edwin

Reviewed by J AG

Reviewed on July 29, 2008

A beautiful calling to our higher self, to see beyond what can be seen so that we can truly "see." Too often we get caught up in our differences. You remind us of our shared heart. Thank you!

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

we are all truly brothers and sisters -- just in different colored wrappers -- God bless -- JMW

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

What a way you have with words my friend, love it! Holly

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Unity and tolerance. I love it. Liz

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Very nicely done dear Vick, this captures the spirit of diversity and love for our fellow human beings as it should be. Enjoyed and felt lifted by this one.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Thank you Vicki for I don't believe people should look on the outside but on the inside and when they do they would realize God made us all the same. Thank you for sharing a wonderful write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

This piece has a never ending spiritual flow to it. "We together are the arrant halo's of divination" Very poetic. I liked this a lot. This piece is gracefully uplifting with a swift overtone to let us remember our respectful connection to each other that crosses all barriers and color lines. Thank you............. Tim

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Anyone yet catch on that perhaps God's color blind and that we should do the same? after all brown eggs and white eggs...don't they taste... eggs?

Georg

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Vickie,
This made me so happy, if only the world felt this way...I love this poem. Very sensitively written and heartfelt, thank you spirit sister.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

Wonderful spiritual words to express how much we are all the same in God's eyes. "Satin Tones of Beauty" personifies all mankind and the goodness within....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

Victoria, I applaud you and the universality of your work.
This love poem should be posted everywhere. -gene.

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

Very beautiful and enlightened sentiments glow from this poem, Victoria ~ "unity" is a favorite theme of mine and you have captured its essence in a unique and wonderful way.