I was watching small children the other day
climbing trees and wrestling at their innocent play
Like young warriors both fearless and bold
and I wondered when I started getting old
I remember one time when I was young and free
looking at the world from the top of a tree
Sitting and thinking on a thick oak tree limb
that I owned the world and all that was within
Catching a fish that was as big as my arm
believing that no one could ever do harm
My only fear was finding a young beauty
who wished to kiss me because girls had cooties
No one loved me more than my Mom
who always had a soft lap to sit upon
The days were all warm then and never were cold
and still I wonder when I got old
I am older now and things have all changed
I now have a job and bills to arrange
I have a car, insurance and home
and now and again I have aches in my bones
I am now much older I have no time for fun
I now lack the energy to play and to run
But one thing I still know as old as I be
that age makes no difference,my Mom still loves me
Oh Sean! This poem is so filled with sentimental values. I just can't help it, I have to read it again and again and again.
It is so nice to something like this on the board. I like the rhyming as well.
A poem of superb quality!
SandieAngel :o)
Reviewed by Matt
Reviewed on March 12, 2002
Never thought you had this stuff in you Sean, keep up the good work.
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2002
Beautiful cadence and rhyme. There is nothing like the mother's love! Good write
Gregg
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2002
good old mum, I can relate.
Reviewed by cuz
Reviewed on March 10, 2002
That is so beautiful Sean!...Remeber that your Cousin Loves you TOO
Reviewed by Mom
Reviewed on March 10, 2002
Yes, Sean, your mom will always love you. And poems like this make her cry as they touch her heart and it burst with pride.
Reviewed by Mom
Reviewed on March 10, 2002
Such a beautiful poem,especially the last line ,but ,you CAN still climb a tree if you really want to,I am 51 years old and still find trees to climb ,you are only too old if you stop believing that you (anyone) can do anything.I loved your poem.
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It is so nice to something like this on the board. I like the rhyming as well.
A poem of superb quality!
SandieAngel :o)
Gregg
Nice rhyme scheme here. It's so hard to believe that I'm not 21 anymore. lol Janet