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Autumn Lover
by Tyriel Blackhand → (All Poetry by Tyriel Blackhand)
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A poem of love life and changes. The sex of the narator is never made clear, thus it is universal in its meaning


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We sat in the bus you, i

     and in the afternoon looked into each others eyes,

and saw: other worlds we would share

We sat in that bus, you and i

    and in the afternoon looked in each others eyes,

and felt the warm sofr sand of  faraway beaches,

       the breeze upon our faces 

 

We sat in the bus you and i,

      and in the dusk looked into each others eyes

and smelt the fragrance of a summer shower on

      a grove of Jacarandas

We sat in that bus you and i

      and in the dusk looked into each others eyes

 and heard the crashing of waves upon the rocks

      of a sleepy little fishing village

 

We sat in the bus you and i

    and in the dark looked into each others eyes

and told each other why we should love,

   and said: “good bye”

 

I sit in that bus, just me alone.

   and silently sigh, in the autumn night i now

   Walk the lonely streets

   and farther away from, my autumn lover’s kiss

 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Autumn Lover"
Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
I always enjoy a good hard review, and I'm not sure how you feel about that, so let me tell you what I like about the poem, and then if you want more information, message me, okay? I really like the softness of the poem, and the loneliness that's felt in the end. There are good visual elements of autumn in here too. Your use of metaphores is excellent, and I even like the cliff-hanger at the end. There are other elements that get in the way of imersion into the poem, however. I'd like to discuss them with you. You obviously have talent! --Charlie

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Nice work...

truly enjoyed...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 14, 2007
Beautuful photograph to compliment your expressions of love and longing. Well done.....

Be safe,
Karen


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