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Glass Slippers (Winter Haiku)
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I know it's almost June, but the Winter has been calling me...

walking through my breath
I kiss the air that bites me
love knows no season

frigid beauty wakes
like a heart finding new love
Winter tears now dry

sleeping beneath me
the lake tolerates footsteps
frozen invasion

festival of white
heavenly crystal ballet
glass slippers soften

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 Reviews of "Glass Slippers (Winter Haiku)"
Reviewed by Michelle Smolen
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
The images are so sharp, I love this one!
Bright Blessings!

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2004
Oh mother nature...must be smiling over this one Lori...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2004
BEAUTIFUL Lori!!!!
I love all of these ones and it is
now when it warms it will call us again!!!

Peg

Reviewed on May 22, 2004
Beautiful write, and great choice of words.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
LORI YOUR WITER HAIKU WAS VERY REFRESHING
AS I AM MELTING AWAY
ON THIS VERY HOT SUMMER DAY

WILLIAM

Reviewed on May 22, 2004
since we are going to be in the 90's this coming week, i sure can use a poem about winter to help me cool off! LOL i once wrote a story about a family in nashville, tn. experiencing "Snow days" because of bad winter weather; and at the time i wrote it it was a steamy and sultry 109 degrees out! yikes! i love winter; i hate the heat, and i can't wait until july, where i go to california for two weeks! at least i can get out of the heat for a LITTLE while!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
"Love knows no season"... perhaps it is, in fact, love that dictates the season in the lover's heart? And is that which finds beauty in each and every different one...certainly haiku to set the feet dancing: alive with freshness, delicacy and beauty, Lori. Crystal write and flawlessly clear. A beaut. Thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
Dani is getting ready to enter Winter, and parts of the Rockies are still snowcapped. Burrrrr. it is 95 here. Thanks for the cool Haiku.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
Well written Lori....made feel kind cold..lol!!

Almost winter here!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
No matter the season there is always a time for haiku so beautifully rendered.

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
festival of white
heavenly crystal ballet
glass slippers soften..... oh wow! I have a feeling for snow and ice-skating so this poem appealed to me very much!

Reviewed by Judith Pleasant
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
Lori,
Even for someone who doesn't like the cold, this brought to mind the beauty of snow flakes falling. --as glass slippers soften.
Great write.
Blessings,
Judith

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
This is so well written, Lori! I can see a wonderful transformation in your writing...

Debashish

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
Though I really don't like winter, I see what you mean about being in one place, and even one we might enjoy, but craving the experience of yet, another. Very well done.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
a beautiful poem embellished via haiku mode ...

Reviewed on May 21, 2004
Excellent write
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
Whoah. God know I love haiku. You have grabbed me by the soul, Lori. And I am so into winter I never care if it's the depth of summer and I get a winter urge. Love this big time. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
these are so well done, Lori...splendid work!

Reviewed by Lori Maynard
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
This returned cool memories on such a hot, humid day :)

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
Excellent!

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
These are truly beautiful, Lori, and the title is so lovely!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
oh i love the winter...........
and i do love these!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
Absolutely divine Lori......really pretty......ty, Dani

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
Romantic You!

TRASK

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
Very beautiful write Poet, that’s why I think I’ll just leave these Haiku’s to you because you do them so well. But, please don’t even mention winter, at least for another two months or so, I want to work on my tan. Keep The Faith.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
Lori, these are great! My heart always returns to winter, although it's not my favorite season to live through. These haiku capture it well. Dawn

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
Oh yes yes yes, simply divine.......

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
Beautful as always,Lori... love the last one especially!
Poets write from the heart not the seasons,which
proves what you are, poet;-)!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
Just wonderful Loria....

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
loved it.
I just did an ice haiku myself today,
must be the hot wether making us all long for something cooler

Reviewed by Abe Rossi (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
I really like them all...you pen this form flawlessly...your ink never wasted...thanx for sharing...Peace Abel

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 21, 2004
Really enjoyed these, Lori. Think I like the second one best.


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