Trust (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

Lori...excellent reiteration of what it takes to restore trust once it is tested and betrayed...very poetic and direct...awesome verse...Fletcher B

Reviewed by DB Prabhu

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

More than the explicit message of trust, the implicit strength of conviction and the underlying power of love is the actual the appeal of your poem. Each line is an independent imagery. This is a nicely balanced poem in form, thought and composition. Good work Lori!!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 5, 2004

Clear and resonant as a bell, Lori, and the message crystal and lucid. There is such a strength here - and yet a longing and a questioning too, I think, that is almost challenge-like! Treasure the questions and honour the journey - God respects them both. Bless you... love your honesty always. Kate xx

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

A wonderful poem with a grand message.

Reviewed by John Reilly (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

I never knew you had so much faith in me im touched
strong write

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on July 4, 2004

Dear Lori,

A superb write Lori !!
Such deep emotions.
thank you for this.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2004

I think he's lost your trust..
Always enjoy your words counselor...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 3, 2004

Trust Is Simply Built On True Friendship,i.e. Ya Gotta Give Before You Can Take!! It Is Pure Thought That Counts!!

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 3, 2004

fabulous, Lori!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 3, 2004

(((lori)))

powerful, exquisitely tender write--well done

that's what trust should be--unconditional

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 3, 2004

Trust is what it is all about Lori
Break that divine rule..and you have broken them all !!1
Exceptional and inspired write Lori

Peter Paton
Home Page: http://www.authorsden.com/peterpaton

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on July 3, 2004

Wonderful rhythm, incredible sentiments. An excellent, excellent piece, Lori. Thank you.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 3, 2004

Oh Lori:

This is sooo inspiring. It is always great to have someone trust us. Wonderful write indeed!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on July 3, 2004

A trustworthy heart is golden
and yours shines. Excellent!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 3, 2004

Beautiful and a trustworthy heart shows sweet lady!!

Love Tinka