Haiku - Another Ten (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on September 4, 2004

All of these are just greate, Lori. Love the frog! (still giggling)
And the one about Christ is excellent too.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

Very impressive once again Lori.....

Great to read you....

TY, Dani ;)

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

Great Huiku, well done

hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 26, 2004

Love em'

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

keep 'em coming ...

Reviewed by Franz Kessler

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Beautiful ambience, and radiant imagery in this sequence of Haikus. Very impressive metaphorics. Lovely. Franz

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Lori, very profound haiku's...I particularly like the frog one...very clever...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Brava,all were fabulous my favorite is:
'crackers and juice
the body of Christ
there should be more '
excellent Lori!
Best wishes always
from
kay.

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Lori,

Brilliant! I am always amazed at how so much meaning can be put into so few words. You are very good at it. I love them all. Thanks for sharing!

Cynthia

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Lori -

You have perfected the haiku - stunning write!

Robert

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

You have these down to a science Lori. Excellent work, Poet.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

We seem to have the market on haiku's cornered.

Reviewed by Ann Piatt

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Very nicely done set of haiku's!

I particularly liked...

"you were cute
when you were young
look at you now"

that one cracked me up...because it could go either way...better or worse!

Ann

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Riveting lines. Thanks.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

This one has a haunting feeling to it.

"you were cute
when you were young
look at you now "

Wonderful writes :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

Lori you get more meaning into few words
than seems possible! Brava! I love them all!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on August 25, 2004

excellent haiku