One Short Poem & Nine Haiku (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 4, 2004

I love haiku. Very nicely created, Lori. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Chuckie Finn (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2004

Zestfully entertaining!
My sincere compliments.

Best Wishes,
Chuckie

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

excellent! undertow and mangoes really grabbed me

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Lori,

All exceptional haiku - super!!

Robert

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

The next to last haiku is priceless! Lori, you've become my daily routine. From now on, I'm never gonna log off without stopping by here for honey in my tea.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

i enjoyed everyone of these

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

Delightful!! Especially like

"leo and taurus
clash over orion�s belt-
star wars"

"costing everything-
the dragonfly rides the bus
for free" - took me a second to get this one! Sad...

"the sign reads
keep off the grass-
stretched out, he smokes"

:)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

All well done

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2004

I've tried and I can't come close to these.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

another collection
of your wonderful Haiku

William ....peace & loce

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

All of these are great!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Another wonderful collection Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

a wonderful collage of idea and poetic impulse ...

i really like the first ku ...

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Like puffs of wisdom, smidgeons of life. Really fine work Lori. I think I understand Haiku's now. Thanks. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Lovely Haikus..and a fabolous poem Lori
Love the " undertow-
a struggle to survive
the depths of love "
You have a very creative mind and soul..
Peter

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Lori, very wondefrful haiku's accompanied by an excellent poem.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

This was my favorite one out of the Haikus:

"a summer stroll
through the farmers market-
fresh fruit, fresh farmers"

And I loved your short poem :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Another group of treasures Lori! Love the tea poem also lots of memories stirred tea lemon and honey, I love it!;-)

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

I like six, seven, and eight. I always enjoy reading your haiku. Thanks.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on August 30, 2004

Loved the Blue Light special, My son and I watch them file up to the counter every night. Well Done