A Short Story in Haiku (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 29, 2004

heart wretching

Reviewed on September 17, 2004

Hi Lori,
I am enjoying your haikus They are most enlightening.

Robin

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 10, 2004

(((lori)))

so much description in this story--powerfully rendered and written--stunning presentation!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on September 10, 2004

Beautifully crafted, Lori. The story resonates. Bravo!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 10, 2004

Sad but beautifully done.

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on September 10, 2004

Now, this is what I call a REAL Cinderella story. Good one.

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on September 10, 2004

intensely sad and delicate...

lovely,
**Mari**

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 10, 2004

I agree wit Ted!!

Me ugly duckling ...always crying for more...LUV!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

In the end we are all more duck than swan.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

Top of the line Ku's, Lori, as always from your pen...Peace, Ed & rufuz (w00f)

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

Great haiku's.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

Exceptonal, yes that's it, Exceptional TY for sharing

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

Lori...very telling and sad tale woven in this haiku story..
Remember when the dove mates it mates for life...the next time has got to be the right time...
Peter

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

Lori, you natural ability to weave Haiku�s into works of art is a shining testament to your dazzling gift at how easily you can create so many timeless treasures. Thank you for sharing them. Take care and be well.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

Beautiful sad tale in this chain of ku Lori!
Wonderfully told!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

Each one sparkles but can't outshine the others

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

you write the loviest haiku's Lori

this is indeed a tale.......well done.......pax A

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

Haiku Is Like Too Many Riddles-Everybody Finds Something Diffferent Toi Read InTo It--Like 22 People Reading a Bible They Come Up With 222,000 Different Implictions/Versions_

1st One is Best All Babies Are Born Beautiful It's Mother Or Father That Is Not There Makes Them Ugly,i.e. Most Of Us Were Born As Accidents Not Really Wanted As Children To Worship But Excess Baggage To Get Rid Of!

TRASK

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2004

Rejection is the most vile to take. Spec when uncalled for..As always top drawer Ku's