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Haiku - A Set of Five
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harvest sleeps-
beneath the ground
death then life

in the distance-
sky and ocean blues blend
parallel attraction

soaring hawk
wings extended-
higher still

her death
rose buds open-
orphan petals fall

tiny thorns
a lovers touch-
tender fingers

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 Reviews of "Haiku - A Set of Five"
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2004
Lori, Smiles read bio love it and congrates YIPEE!!!!!!!
I always love reading your haiku....
LP

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2004
Great haiku's Lori.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on September 12, 2004
Lori,
I saved this one to my library!
Most outstanding work! I hear you
are surpassing yourself!(grin)
Love ya!
Becca

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2004
I love these and I am impressed at how you can do these so well.
"her death
rose buds open-
orphan petals fall"

Priceless!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 12, 2004
Something about each of the first four "sticks" like the tiny little thorns of the fifth! A wonderful collection yet again! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty
Reviewed on September 12, 2004
first and third are my favorites :)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
I just can't figure how it is you do these so well.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Lori I didn't think you could improve on your past haiku!
Kudo's! these are beyond the pale!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Beautiful, Lori. Powerfully moving.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Wow..Lori
Love them all
You have surpassed yourself...
Peter

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
it's not easy to put an entire idea into 5-7-5 but yours are always inspired and successful at achieving so ...

Reviewed on September 11, 2004
I'll take #5, lot of thought in just 3 lines

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
In agreement with Kate here, number four is the winner.

Night skies and starlight
HH

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Love this!!

"in the distance-
sky and ocean blues blend
parallel attraction "


Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
This was my favorite one out of the five;

"her death
rose buds open-
orphan petals fall"

Reviewed on September 11, 2004
(((lori)))

these soar with vivid imagination--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)


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