Forever - A Love Poem (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on October 8, 2004

coooooooooooooooooooool. What a poetess. l&p G

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 4, 2004

Unique poems come rarely. This one of yours is unique because your wordflow has a natural rhythm and the meaning of the words are sublime and precious.

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

Lovely piece, Lori. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by J. Pajot

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

Wonderfully romantic, M'Lady. One of the few redeeming traits of humanity, romance...I hope you always have it at your call. Bright blessings to you and yours, Jim.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

Lori, this is so lovely.

Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

VEry sensual love poem. Love it. :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

love is forever
forever is love
loved this

William ....Peace

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2004

You had to go and say "the tongue of my dreams" didn't you!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

So loving and compelling. God knows how I relate to what you express in these verses, Lori. Thank you for sharing this soul-grasping offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

Wonderful write!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

simply elegant!

Reviewed by Linda Roman

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

Nice work... I like

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

Caressing your memory,
with the tongue of my dreams,

luv these lines ...

a most beautiful state of mind!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

An everlasting love personified in beautiful eternal words....
Simply gorgeous Lori...
Peter

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

Lori, This is both eloquent and elegant! Straight to
the heart of the matter! Superb!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

Great love poem, well done, short and sweet but with a powerful punch to the heart

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

This is stunning Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

As I just commented on Elga's poem which has a very similar theme - I hope you Dream, and Write on, Poetess - forever.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

Dream on Lori. Without dreamers life would be a hollow place of existance. Whoever is the focus of this should consider the treasure at hand. I really enjoyed this one

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

Keep On Dreaming ,i.e. In This Holy Hell World Nothing is Forever Except:

TAXES & MORE TAXES & TAXES AFTER YOUR DEATH Or Whomever They Can F--k Over If They Can't Get It $$$ From You!

Romantic You Write!

TRASK

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

Dear Lori,

If we are fools, for dreaming and loving, then I shall remain a fool, for I believe there is nothing more rewarding than having dreams of love, and love having dreams. Your poem touched me, the last stanza is pure joy. Thank you for sharing this beautifully written poem Lori, may all your dreams and love be fulfilled. And keep dreaming always.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

(((lori)))

timeless beauty and passion resonate in tender heartbeats :) delightful!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

What a classy love poem. You touched everything in such a beautiful way. I agree with Kate. The last stanza could stand alone. I'm just in awe of this write.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

This is precious, Lori! Passionate and yet tender; the "heat of the moment" and enduring. Beautiful sentiments couched in deep-feather velvet rhyme! The last stanza could stand alone, I think. This speaks of a love that burns intensely and yet stays the course. Just gorgeous, thank you. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 2, 2004

nice one, lor! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D